Clock Ticks

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clock ticks moment fleeting gossamer calm twilight glistening vermilion aura Sun leaving, painting sky with crimson hue past poignant, divine, eternal breathtaking present thrills limitless charm clock ticks February 8, 2022 "Give Me A Rictameter" Poetry Contest Sponsor: M.L.Kiser Syllables (2-4-6-8-10-8-6-4-2) checked by HMS.com

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Meghan Hutchings

Date: 2/17/2022 11:44:00 AM

Congratulations! I love all the beauty you fit into one fleeting moment! I could visualize it so well because of your excellent word choice. Wonderful job! God bless and much love...Meghan

Jcb Brul

Date: 2/10/2022 6:41:00 AM

Splendid piece. I am new to this form and it seems hard due to word limits but you did it well dear Mala. Best wishes in the contest and onto my FAVES.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 2/10/2022 7:01:00 AM

Thanks, JCB. This form is new to me too! It's wonderful to learn new forms.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 2/9/2022 8:22:00 PM

Very picturesque, love the vivid colors here like vermillion and crimson, the limitless sky is so inspiring! Best wishes for the contest~

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 2/10/2022 7:03:00 AM

Thank you. I love using colour-words, Michelle - objects sound vibrant!