Clock

CLOCK running with footprints no chance to turn back for unspent revelries where love's seasons fall in haste " precious moments ceased by time's hands" Create Your Pyramid Ashley Conte 28 May 14

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/16/2014 3:12:00 PM

ohh, a full grasp of moments spent in haste, ashley.. thanks for dropping by and . belated congrats on your high slot in my challenge!.. huggs

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/14/2014 8:01:00 AM

I really enjoyed reading this one again, congratulations.

Arlene Smith

Date: 6/12/2014 10:21:00 AM

Ashley, congrats on your win with this fantastic write... Arlene..

Casarah Nance

Date: 6/12/2014 8:27:00 AM

Terrific, grats on the win!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/11/2014 11:58:00 PM

Loved that last line. GREAT win. Congratulations.

Skat A

Date: 6/11/2014 11:09:00 PM

Ashley, :) CONGRATS in Nette's CREATE YOUR PYRAMID contest! Luv ~SKAT~

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/11/2014 3:16:00 PM

Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Faye Gibson

Date: 6/11/2014 2:22:00 PM

Congratulations on a well deserved win.

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/11/2014 10:00:00 AM

My favorite is the line "unspent revelries!!" I wish I had thought of that lovely phrase !! Well done, Ashley!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/11/2014 9:43:00 AM

Ashley, creative. Congratulations, with your sweet PYRAMID win.... Hugs ~LINDA~

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/11/2014 6:30:00 AM

Congrats on a fine win, creating a lovely Pyramid, ASHLEY

Paul Callus

Date: 6/11/2014 4:58:00 AM

Ah! this is a lovely pyramid, Ashley! ... right from start to finish; much enjoyed! Congrats on a deserved win! // paul

Seren Roberts

Date: 6/11/2014 4:04:00 AM

congrats on a fine write ..Seren

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 6/11/2014 2:31:00 AM

Hahah your first triplet is so cute.. I can picture a running clock..:) and your 2nd triplet is true so is time gold which is more intensified by your last line..:) great win!