Cliff Top View

Clouds in unison float across a wide blue sea... reflection in vogue. © Harry J Horsman 2012

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Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 2/19/2012 9:24:00 PM

I love the view! This is really a nice ku; as I understand a 5 7 5 syllables are perfect and the last line is a beautiful summing up to the whole lovely picture. You need a contest to put this one in. Luv, Elizabeth

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/19/2012 7:10:00 PM

SPIFFY!! That word just came to me for how I would describe this one.

Russell Sivey

Date: 2/18/2012 12:09:00 PM

Great write my friend! Keep them coming...I love Haiku and Senryu they are such fun to write and are very meaningful when read! Excellent Work!!

Kash Poet

Date: 2/18/2012 10:51:00 AM

Another very good haiku by you harry.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/18/2012 9:09:00 AM

breathtaking view Harry luv and such splendor to behold.. soon days will be like this here too...good luck if for contest..