Cliche

Is that your name? Do you want to call it grotesque fame? Is it truly there? Or it is floating in thin air? Can you grasp it with your tiny hands? Is anyone there from your chosen land? Do you wish to call it by your name? Hasn't it arrived yet? Or it is just another game? The compilation you hesitate to conclude, You aspire to present it as your finest, dude. Nobody can live long with this gruesome win, Is it your another committed sin? Your fame is quite a cliche, Everybody wants it to be their greatest niche. Your utmost blessings are your most disastrous curses, You are disowning your indispensable circles. Is it truly a blessing or just a curse? Nobody can blame others they cannot trust. Is it on the brink of possessing an innocent soul? Or is it just a snowball rolling around without any resolute goal?

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Beata Agustin

Date: 9/22/2023 4:16:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your reflective thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Abir Sawran
Date: 9/22/2023 9:22:00 AM

Thank you, Beata Agustin, for your honest feedback. It inspires me to produce more thoughtful words in my mind and type them with the same or higher enthusiasm, which I always seek to reflect in my writings. Probably the great German Netflix series Dark quotes it accurately: "The beginning is the end, and the end is the beginning." For me, regarding poetry, the infinite loop represents the poetry that starts with one's ending and another's beginning. I appreciate all the writers for their remarkable efforts in overthinking and making the world more interesting day by day.