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Cleopatra and Mark Antony

Cleopatra and Mark Antony
 
Cleopatra fell in love with Mark Antony 
She became ruler of Egypt by Antony's decree.
Forced to flee Egypt, her rumored suicide plan...
She let an asp kill her over the loss of her man.

Antony so beguiled by love for his Queen's desire
Giving her much land provoked Roman senate's ire
After Cleopatra became Mark Antony's wife
He thought she was dead, so he took his own life.

1-15-19

Clerihew Contest ~ Second Placement Premiere contest
Sponsor Carolyn Devonshire

Note:
After Caesar's assassination, Cleopatra set her sights on the dashing Roman general Mark Antony. The two began an affair, resulting in twins in 40 B.C. Antony wed Cleopatra in 36 B.C., and appointed his new wife ruler of Egypt, Cyprus, Crete, and Cyria. This abuse of power so outraged the Roman Senate that they denounced him a traitor. After losing a major battle at sea, Antony and Cleopatra were forced to flee to Egypt in 31 B.C. In desperation, Cleopatra spread rumors of her own suicide. Antony, unaware of her plan, stabbed himself to death. When Cleopatra heard of this, she took her own life by inducing a poisonous snake to bite her.
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Leffanta Avatar
January 27, 2019 at 3:30 PM
Although history was written by her enemies, she must have been quite a lady. Like Nefertiti, those who walk in beauty are vilified for ever after. Aloha! Rico
Dutta Avatar
January 25, 2019 at 8:48 PM
i am also fascinated on Cleopatra. But my poem didn't win. CONGRATS.
Horne Avatar
January 22, 2019 at 3:25 PM
wow, what an awesome pair of clerihews
Fleming Avatar
January 21, 2019 at 2:58 PM
Hello, Connie. :) Strange I should visit today and see this poem of yours...I have just finished watching a documentary on this legendary love affair. Congrats on your win! My very warmest regards as always. :) john
Godwin Avatar
January 21, 2019 at 10:30 AM
Oh, the similarities between them and Romeo and Juliet is a great part of the tragedy factor that make your cherihew's memorial. Very creative and symbolic. Poetry yawns, I mean Poetry hugs ... CayCay (even if I did yawn it was a 'poet' yawn (me), not a 'poetry yawn' (you.) Once again I'm tired enough to get the giggles. My adult will write you soon. Love ... CayCay
Babcock Avatar
January 19, 2019 at 11:56 AM
Excellent and love the piece of history that you included with it. love phyl
Allison Avatar
January 19, 2019 at 9:25 AM
Dropping back with my congratulations on your win connie:-) hugs Jan xx
Horsman Avatar
January 18, 2019 at 4:54 PM
Awesome Clerihew, Connie, congratulations on your win..
Y. Avatar
January 17, 2019 at 11:00 PM
Hi Connie, I don't know how I missed this clerihew! You chose a great couple. It was well written and had good rhymes and content. Excellent job! Congratulations on your winning write. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
Dietrich Avatar
January 17, 2019 at 7:00 PM
great seeing this one again on the winner list. BIG congrats, Connie.
Callus Avatar
January 17, 2019 at 4:37 PM
Your tragic Clerihew ended with a happy finale, Connie - a deserved podium finish! Congratulations! Regards // paul
Kiser Avatar
January 17, 2019 at 1:18 PM
Wow, congrat's; it is well deserved. Tragic poem; tragic history. Nevertheless, well done.
Proxenos Avatar
January 17, 2019 at 1:07 PM
Hi Connie, Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Jennifer.
Proxenos Avatar
January 17, 2019 at 1:05 PM
Hi Connie, Such a great poem - almost a Romeo and Juliet story or the old West Side story which was my mom's favorite film, even maybe a Bonnie and Clyde story. Love is beautiful, but it seems that some take love a step further, they become desperate and dangerous and sadly death becomes the only option. Really a lovely, lovely (sad) poem Connie. Poetry hugs, Jennifer
Raven Avatar
January 17, 2019 at 10:09 AM
Ni Connie, congratulations on your win in the contest with this wonderful write. One of the most Iconic love's in history. An iconic tragedy given your creative flare, reads winner. Love the content, an excellent write Connie. Have a wonderful Thursday. Hugs....Mike. XX
La France Avatar
January 17, 2019 at 9:05 AM
Connie, congratulations on your win in the contest, what a great and tragic couple to write about, their love must have been so great ~
Kendrick Avatar
January 17, 2019 at 6:10 AM
Creative winner. Way to go with this one. Congrats on your win. Sara
Rodrigues Avatar
January 16, 2019 at 9:50 PM
A royal Romeo and Juliet couple! Congrats!
Laurie Avatar
January 16, 2019 at 8:32 PM
Hello Connie … I had never followed up on how this piece of history occurred, however you short explanation certainly is helpful - thank you Connie - Lindsay
Hinshaw Avatar
January 16, 2019 at 7:05 PM
Connie: Congrats for your well-deserved win! Also thanks for the accompanying history lesson! I appreciate your kind comments re my win in the contest - Bob
Johnson Avatar
January 16, 2019 at 6:51 PM
I knew there was a connection but I knew none of the details of their romance. Congratulations Connie. Love, Joyce
Haight Avatar
January 16, 2019 at 5:01 PM
An excellent Cherihew poem, Connie, on such a historical and tragic love story! Congratulations on your fine placement. Hugs, Sandra
Roper Avatar
January 16, 2019 at 4:02 PM
I enjoyed reading this lovely clerihew, Connie, very well written with great imagery. . Hugs Eve ~`*
Messina Avatar
January 16, 2019 at 3:40 PM
Great clerihew, Connie. I love the notes you added. That is some story, never knew how that all went down...lol Congratulations on your placement :) Charlie
Dietrich Avatar
January 16, 2019 at 3:16 PM
you know, I am not sure I ever knew the part about Mark Antony!! He TOO took his life?? I had no idea about the history you made note of. how did I not know that?? Thanks for the informative clerihew, Connie. I see you got second place. big congrats and thanks so much for all your recent comments on my poems.
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 16, 2019 at 6:27 PM
Thank you Andrea. I found out a few things from this contest too I didn't know. : ) xxoo
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