Cleopatra

Cleopatra, Queen of the Nile Lived and reigned Egypt style. Her kingdom wrenched from her grasp, She took her life with an asp.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/23/2012 1:24:00 PM

Love how you worked the asp into it!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/9/2012 8:11:00 AM

It is always a pleasure to read your poetry Kim. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on mine. Love, Carol

Gwendolen Song

Date: 1/31/2012 1:06:00 PM

Egypt style?..you coined a great new phrase, Kim! Fun one AGAIN!! You got the clerihew fever. Gwendolen

Kyle Kriticos

Date: 1/27/2012 9:02:00 AM

Wow nice poem here I love the story of Cleopatra and with such brief words you have said alot

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 1/27/2012 5:08:00 AM

Cleopatra is a perennial subject..nice one...

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/26/2012 11:32:00 PM

Kim,,a wonderful clerihew..... thank you for sharing.., have yourself a wonderful Friday! ;-) always,..pd

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/26/2012 11:17:00 PM

Who could forget the late Elizabeth Taylor in that great role in the epic motion picture? You have described her well in this clerihew.

Don Johnson

Date: 1/26/2012 7:41:00 PM

but she did it all with style, had romans to beguile, perhaps a secret smile, ceasar an anthony....