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Clemency - Ct

a change of weather —
      a storm is brewing

Lightning
   ~ loud ~
Lights out

          liquidation of a dream
grave thoughts

  looking for home
look to the pearly gates

           death of a storm
death of darkness
      end of silence

euphoria

           flourishing with rosy cheeks
from death to life
     happiness ever after

Hallelujah

7/8/2019

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Beata Agustin Date: 7/22/2019 2:48:00 AM Wow! Congrats. Thanks for sharing your poetic talent. God bless you. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 7/22/2019 7:22:00 AM Thanks so much, Beata! Hugs...Kim

Kurt Ravidas Date: 7/15/2019 10:20:00 AM Amazing! It's really amazing, Kim. I don't understand yet how one can make poetry of headlines. Next time, I'll take part too) P.S.: By the way, I see an internal poem inside this poem: "Brewing loud grave pearly death euphoria rosy happiness Hallelujah". Pretty surrealistic one) Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 7/15/2019 4:56:00 PM Your comment means a lot to me, Kurt! Be blessed! Hugs...Kim

Richard Lamoureux Date: 7/15/2019 8:53:00 AM This is so good Kim! Congratulations. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 7/15/2019 4:56:00 PM Thank you, Richard!

Charles Messina Date: 7/15/2019 3:00:00 AM Kim, you did an amazing job with your titles. love the format. Congratulations on your win in my contest. :) hugs Charlie Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 7/15/2019 4:57:00 PM Thanks so much! Not an easy contest!

Jeanne Mcgee Date: 7/14/2019 11:44:00 PM Yes! this works so well. Love how you put them together. Congrats on your win. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 7/15/2019 4:57:00 PM Thank you, Jeanne!

Gershon Wolf Date: 7/14/2019 10:28:00 PM Like the ascension in your assembly of titles here, Kim -- and congrats on your well-deserved win in the contest! :) gw Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 7/14/2019 10:30:00 PM Thank you, my friend!

Alexis Y. Date: 7/12/2019 5:15:00 PM Wow! Kim, You did a great job weaving your " poem" titles into a poem. Good content as well. It looks likes a winner to me. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 7/12/2019 8:39:00 PM Thanks so much, Alexis!

Arturo Michael Date: 7/11/2019 7:33:00 AM We'll surely find out one day...I hope its the way you said it... Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 7/11/2019 5:45:00 PM And more! Thanks!

Caren Krutsinger Date: 7/10/2019 8:17:00 PM "flourishing with rosy cheeks - happiness forever! " Yes, let us please strive for this! Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 7/10/2019 10:31:00 PM Yes! Thank you, sweet lady!

Nette Onclaud Date: 7/9/2019 4:54:00 PM what a blessing of a write, kim...huggs Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 7/9/2019 8:25:00 PM Thanks, Nette! Hugs 2 U

Alkas Poetry Date: 7/9/2019 3:33:00 PM Dear KIM, Poetic thoughts that reinforce the belief in the ethereal and the divine ... After the Stormy Life in flesh, the euphoria of the real life in spirit Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 7/9/2019 8:25:00 PM Thank you, Alkas!

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/9/2019 12:02:00 PM - "Hallelujah ... happiness ever after" ... love it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 7/9/2019 12:04:00 PM Thank you, Anne-Lise! :)