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Clemency - Ct

a change of weather — a storm is brewing Lightning ~ loud ~ Lights out liquidation of a dream grave thoughts looking for home look to the pearly gates death of a storm death of darkness end of silence euphoria flourishing with rosy cheeks from death to life happiness ever after Hallelujah 7/8/2019

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Beata Agustin

Date: 7/22/2019 2:48:00 AM

Wow! Congrats. Thanks for sharing your poetic talent. God bless you.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/22/2019 7:22:00 AM

Thanks so much, Beata! Hugs...Kim

Kurt Ravidas

Date: 7/15/2019 10:20:00 AM

Amazing! It's really amazing, Kim. I don't understand yet how one can make poetry of headlines. Next time, I'll take part too) P.S.: By the way, I see an internal poem inside this poem: "Brewing loud grave pearly death euphoria rosy happiness Hallelujah". Pretty surrealistic one)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/15/2019 4:56:00 PM

Your comment means a lot to me, Kurt! Be blessed! Hugs...Kim

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/15/2019 8:53:00 AM

This is so good Kim! Congratulations.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/15/2019 4:56:00 PM

Thank you, Richard!

Charles Messina

Date: 7/15/2019 3:00:00 AM

Kim, you did an amazing job with your titles. love the format. Congratulations on your win in my contest. :) hugs Charlie

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/15/2019 4:57:00 PM

Thanks so much! Not an easy contest!

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 7/14/2019 11:44:00 PM

Yes! this works so well. Love how you put them together. Congrats on your win.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/15/2019 4:57:00 PM

Thank you, Jeanne!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/14/2019 10:28:00 PM

Like the ascension in your assembly of titles here, Kim -- and congrats on your well-deserved win in the contest! :) gw

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/14/2019 10:30:00 PM

Thank you, my friend!

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/12/2019 5:15:00 PM

Wow! Kim, You did a great job weaving your " poem" titles into a poem. Good content as well. It looks likes a winner to me. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/12/2019 8:39:00 PM

Thanks so much, Alexis!

Arturo Michael

Date: 7/11/2019 7:33:00 AM

We'll surely find out one day...I hope its the way you said it...

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/11/2019 5:45:00 PM

And more! Thanks!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/10/2019 8:17:00 PM

"flourishing with rosy cheeks - happiness forever! " Yes, let us please strive for this!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/10/2019 10:31:00 PM

Yes! Thank you, sweet lady!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/9/2019 4:54:00 PM

what a blessing of a write, kim...huggs

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/9/2019 8:25:00 PM

Thanks, Nette! Hugs 2 U

Alkas Poetry

Date: 7/9/2019 3:33:00 PM

Dear KIM, Poetic thoughts that reinforce the belief in the ethereal and the divine ... After the Stormy Life in flesh, the euphoria of the real life in spirit

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/9/2019 8:25:00 PM

Thank you, Alkas!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/9/2019 12:02:00 PM

- "Hallelujah ... happiness ever after" ... love it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/9/2019 12:04:00 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise! :)