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Panes of dirty glass conceal the past where futures were tied to land and soil. And pa fingers a hand full of dirt reflecting on years of pain and toil. A rusty sun bronzes a foil star ma hung in the window for good luck. And a small candle awaits a match to defend against the dark when struck. Hunger gnaws at our empty stomachs, everything we plant is doomed to die. And yet, ma slips me and pa a smile, showing us where her loyalties lie. Looking up to a burnt almond sky, she searches for clouds other than dust. And scans for life in neighboring homes long ago left to decay and rust. Abandoning a dream lost to time, ma loses hope and accepts defeat. And I can see the pain in pa's eyes, the trickling tears mocking his conceit. California calls in shades of green, with lush pastures and clear mountain streams. And common sense says that we must move far from this dust bowl of dying dreams. (Quatrain) 9/23/2017

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Date: 3/8/2018 8:46:00 AM
A beautiful heartfelt powerful portrait of a hardworking family living in dire poverty. A FAVE for me, Emile.
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Date: 3/8/2018 9:48:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate you insightful comments. Emile.
Date: 9/23/2017 8:38:00 PM
A perfect description of a farmer's struggle to survive when there's a draught. So sad...but a great write!
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Date: 9/24/2017 9:23:00 AM
Thank you Carole, your support and comments are always most welcome my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/23/2017 1:55:00 PM
Wow, what a well written story with such detail Emile. ! :)
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Date: 9/23/2017 5:33:00 PM
Thank you Heidi, your support is greatly appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/23/2017 10:43:00 AM
A rich well woven tale, nice pen my friend xomo
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Date: 9/23/2017 5:33:00 PM
Thank you Maureen, your support is greatly appreciated my friend, Emile.

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