cleaning

cleaning day sucks as life oft does ~ not my vac
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Dietrich Avatar
October 7, 2025 at 9:33 PM
Hi Caycay. I am just going down the winner list. Congrats. I miss not hearing from you. I hope after my surgery tomorrow I will walk away from it not needing a cane !! Hope we can talk soon
Goldsmith Avatar
October 7, 2025 at 1:25 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your creative "cleaning" write. Have a Blessed day writing away.........
Alhemaidy Avatar
October 7, 2025 at 12:34 PM
Hello sweet poetess :-) Congratulations on your nice win. Have a nice day~ AA
Messina Avatar
October 7, 2025 at 4:54 AM
CayCay, I really enjoyed this one. But I was looking for imagery as noted in my contest. Loved this though! Congrats on your placement!
Messina Avatar
October 10, 2025 at 2:36 PM
LOL- Oh, now I see...Thanks CayCay! You're great too! :)
Godwin Avatar
October 8, 2025 at 4:16 PM
You mean you couldn't see me having a fit, throwing things, slamming the vac around, maybe even saying bad words? No image? I AM TOTALLY KIDDING AND LAUGHING. I know exactly what you mean and agree. The contest was closing, and I just went for something (I think that's what happened). Anyway, all is golden, you're great. CayCay
Andresen Avatar
September 29, 2025 at 1:03 AM
- Love the last line ... creatively written ... cleaning day sucks, CayCay :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - Have a lovely week :) - hugs
Godwin Avatar
September 29, 2025 at 2:29 PM
One must laugh when the only thing should suck, doesn't. Glad you liked it, Anne-Lise. CayCay
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 28, 2025 at 6:56 PM
the idea of cleaning must be in the air...did the same thing today...enjoyed this short poem, hugs, Sara
Godwin Avatar
September 29, 2025 at 2:30 PM
Just because everyone is reporting they cleaned today, doesn't mean I have to report that I did not, right? Thank you for commenting, Sara. CayCay
Dietrich Avatar
September 28, 2025 at 3:37 PM
Yes. This is an improvement from what you said before! Good one
Hind Avatar
September 28, 2025 at 1:05 PM
LOL so cool, too- you must have been in my head, because I just sat down and have been cleaning an hour and a half :D
Godwin Avatar
September 29, 2025 at 2:31 PM
Did the vacuum suck for you? Ha Thanks, Paige. CayCay
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