Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Free verse

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My poem for Easter 2017

 

- Clean Feet -

Humble yourself  in unshod feet
Burning hot sand between the toes
Green palm leaves under bright blue sky
Listen to the story and guard it well

Read the writing in the sand before the tide comes
Judgment power, as lightning before thunder
Tell smiles and hugs instead of your pain and tears
Love will always consist, miracles are shown before











12.04.2017
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Bl Devnath May 12, 2017 at 12:26 PM Excellently pictured my lovely dear friend. A beautiful 7 sure. Loved always, bl Anne-Lise Andresen May 12, 2017 at 1:07 PM - Thanks for your kind visit a 7 and lovely comments, Bl :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Anil Deo April 19, 2017 at 7:05 AM Anne-Lise, I came back to this one to thank you for everything. Even for saying U are not Christian. This poem is an invitation to Hawaii - any island spot & sands. Yet, the Judgment Tide is on the way, and writing on the the sand. Anne-Lise, believe me, the best Christians are those who preach with their lives, not showing up in buildings called "church for Jesus" of "our kind." Shalom shalom and Paaske goes on! Anne-Lise Andresen April 19, 2017 at 7:49 AM - We have many churches here in Norway, Anil - However, they are mostly empty - They are used for Christmas, Easter, confirmations, weddings, baptism and burial - If anyone has the desire to go in for a prayer ... the doors are locked - I agree with your last line - Thanks for your kind visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Doug Vinson April 17, 2017 at 11:45 AM Hot sand between the toes.... Anne-Lise, I have not felt that in a very long time. This poem makes me feel young. : ) Anne-Lise Andresen April 17, 2017 at 12:24 PM - It's time to find a sandy beach and sunshine, Doug :) - Thanks for your kind visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Roy Pett April 16, 2017 at 11:07 AM Gorgeous poem, love the picture, happy Easter to you and yours. :)) Anne-Lise Andresen April 16, 2017 at 11:26 AM - Thanks for the friendly comments, Roy :) - Appreciated your visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Frederic Parker April 13, 2017 at 5:27 PM As I live in Florida I know a lot about hot sand and palm leaves, love the line read the writing in the sand before the tide comes..it says it all Anne-Lise Andresen April 14, 2017 at 8:05 AM - Thanks for the friendly comments, Frederic :) - Appreciated your visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun April 13, 2017 at 12:25 PM I'm back to read one more poem of yours my dear friend Anne Lise. I was interrupted by my cousin's phone call a while ago and finally we've finished our conversation. Now, I'm blessed and happy to read another wonderful and great piece from you--an Easter poem with beautiful and inspiring messages perfectly matched with adorable pic. Thanks a lot once again. God bless and More Best Wishes for a Wonderful Easter! love lots and hugs, Leonora Anne-Lise Andresen April 13, 2017 at 2:07 PM - Nice that you enjoy my little Easter Poems, dear Leonora - Always a pleasure to see you :) - Hope you have a wonderful Easter with your family :) - hugs & <3 // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper April 13, 2017 at 10:01 AM Wisdom to follow, enjoyed reading Hugs dear friend Anne-Lise Andresen April 13, 2017 at 11:19 AM - Thanks for your kind visit and lovely comments, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maria Williams April 13, 2017 at 4:54 AM You have depicted Easter in a wonderful way Anne-Lise, and how cute is the little duckling. Easter wishes my dear.Hugs xxx Anne-Lise Andresen April 13, 2017 at 5:38 AM - Thanks for the friendly comments, Maria :) - Appreciated your visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis April 13, 2017 at 2:11 AM Clean feet, kind heart, blessed soul. Your poem encompasses all in a very poetic way dear, Anne-Lise. A 7+. Anne-Lise Andresen April 13, 2017 at 4:14 AM - Easter's message told with my simple words, my friend Demetrios :) - Thank you very much for your visit a 7 and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jean Murray April 12, 2017 at 7:01 PM Like a message in a bottle arriving on the tide, you poem is wondrous Anne-Lise. I love the way you write. Anne-Lise Andresen April 13, 2017 at 4:09 AM - And I love your comments and visits, Jean :) - Thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lisa Ricci April 12, 2017 at 5:35 PM Anne Anne Anne - My goodness. Could this entry be more endearing and beautiful. I think not. How marvelous the words and thought. Very. Allow me to say Anne that this entry is original and wonderful. I love it. Have a wonderful night. Well done entirely. Anne-Lise Andresen April 13, 2017 at 4:06 AM - Nice that you enjoy my Easter poem "Clean Feet", Lisa :) - Thanks for the great comments - Appreciated your visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lynn Marie April 12, 2017 at 3:58 PM So beautiful Anne-Lise:) Lovely words, adorable picture! wishing you a very happy Easter:) lynnxxx Anne-Lise Andresen April 13, 2017 at 4:03 AM - Happy Easter, Lynn :) - Thank you very much for your visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith April 12, 2017 at 3:21 PM Very beautiful my friend...have a Happy Easter Anne-Lise Andresen April 13, 2017 at 4:02 AM - Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, Tim - Happy Easter :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Anil Deo April 12, 2017 at 3:19 PM Anne-Lise, an Easter tour de force! I have never seen/read Judgment described so well as an incoming tide. Original and spiritual in every way. Thanks- Happy Easter. How do Norweigians say Easter/ Pas or PAAS? (in 100 years I might write poems in your native language. Brava!) Anne-Lise Andresen April 13, 2017 at 3:53 AM - In Norwegian we say: PÅSKE :) - Thanks for friendly visits and comments, Anil :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands April 12, 2017 at 3:13 PM A sweet picture and beautiful poem. So nice to hear. Thanks for sharing :) Anne-Lise Andresen April 13, 2017 at 4:01 AM - Thank you very much, Heidi - Nice to see you on my Easter poems :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green April 12, 2017 at 2:54 PM This was beautiful my friend. Your have written a poem with a great message layering it in light and truth. Anne-Lise Andresen April 13, 2017 at 3:57 AM - Appreciated your visit, Chris :) - Thanks for the lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Smith April 12, 2017 at 1:54 PM Reads like biblical verse, well done Anne-Lise... Anne-Lise Andresen April 13, 2017 at 3:55 AM - Thanks for the friendly comments, Charlie :) - Appreciated your visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phillip Garcia April 12, 2017 at 1:24 PM A lovely lullaby with beautiful imagery. The little yellow birdie whispers no lies. Excellent post Anne-Lise Andresen April 12, 2017 at 1:38 PM - It was meant as a Easter message ... not as a lullaby, Phillip - Thanks for visiting and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)