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Clean

Clean? I whisper into the dark tracing the very skin I used to puncture. 456 days. 1 year, 3 months, and 3 day's spent, trying to heal the very skin I harmed. The skin I harmed because it was my only salvation Before, I was afraid of ridicule, would I be sent away if it got worse? So, I re-trace my skin, My own skin, That held me together through the pain, through the darkness. My own skin, Worth more than a thousand words, And I whisper into the darkness, that fateful word, once more; Clean.

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Date: 12/12/2024 11:40:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 12/9/2024 1:37:00 PM
this is beautiful
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Date: 12/9/2024 5:42:00 AM
This is my first ever poem, so I'm not entirely sure if I've done it right!! Constructive criticism is appreciated!! ??
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