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Claws of Moonlight

While claws of full moon pierce the lanes, beware For Hallow slakes on a witching twilight, Ghoulish tricks from dark shadows choke the air Engraving beams with ripped imprints of fright! Halloween Moon Contest of Eve Roper 10/20/2015

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Robert Lindley

Date: 10/22/2015 8:53:00 PM

Congrats on a great win my friend. A7

Carol Eastman

Date: 10/22/2015 12:33:00 PM

Congrats on this great win!

Kelly Deschler

Date: 10/21/2015 11:58:00 PM

This would be a terrifying poem to read on Halloween night. I love it, Nette! :)

James Inman

Date: 10/21/2015 7:22:00 AM

Nette, you make me want to say, OOOHHHHHhhhh! as my eyes get bigger. Well done.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/21/2015 6:46:00 AM

Congratulations on your Nette. Your entry is so unique!

Arlene Smith

Date: 10/21/2015 5:57:00 AM

Congrats on a great win my friend!!...

Michael Tor

Date: 10/21/2015 3:37:00 AM

Nicest win for you nette!!!

Seren Roberts

Date: 10/21/2015 3:35:00 AM

Congratulations Nette ....Seren

Balveen Cheema

Date: 10/21/2015 2:24:00 AM

A beautiful halloween moon write! Superbly poetic Nette! Love, Balveen

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 10/20/2015 10:58:00 PM

Congrats on ur awesome win with this superb write nette!

Viv Wigley

Date: 10/20/2015 10:25:00 PM

Lovely, atmospheric and chilling. Well done, nette, and congrats! Viv x

Dan Cwiak

Date: 10/20/2015 10:23:00 PM

Wonderfully put together Nette. Congrats on your win.

John Lawless

Date: 10/20/2015 10:23:00 PM

Now that is one spooky freakin' halloween moon. Got shivers just reading it.

Eve Roper

Date: 10/20/2015 9:28:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, and thank you so much for participating in my contest.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/20/2015 5:34:00 PM

a creepy moon Nette congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 10/20/2015 5:27:00 PM

Congratulations in your win. Excellent poem.

Sandra Haight

Date: 10/20/2015 4:46:00 PM

Love your 'Halloween Moon' poem, Nette. Congratulations on your First Place win. Hugs, Sandra

Emile Pinet

Date: 10/20/2015 10:52:00 AM

This is full of fun and adventure offering the allure of halloween and scary thoughts. Emile.

Robert Lindley

Date: 10/20/2015 7:40:00 AM

Excellent poetry my friend. "Engraving beams with ripped imprints of fright!" Golden verse.. A7

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 10/20/2015 7:28:00 AM

Spooky but delightfully so! Good luck with the contest, dear nette! A seven!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/20/2015 4:00:00 AM

- A creepy moon, Nette :) - Great written - Best wishes in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 10/20/2015 2:12:00 AM

An excellent write from you Nette. This is so much interesting and penned beautiful........A.M.

Franco Gonza

Date: 10/20/2015 12:30:00 AM

Chilling, awesome poem! This left me feeling the darker side of Halloween with spooky lines and mood.You clearly put a lot of work into this, and pulled it off !

CayCay Jennings

Date: 10/20/2015 12:20:00 AM

BOO! Well done, Nette - I enjoyed it ... CayCay