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Classical Elements - 2 - Wood

strength , flexibility spring , new growth sprouts from the earth bamboo .. a poet's words

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Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 9/26/2009 8:55:00 PM

Bamboo is definitely very, very strong, even though flexible, it doesn't break. Very nice imagery. It is also interesting that the thought of wood makes you think of spring. Thanks for sharing. Caroline.

Corinne Curcio

Date: 9/24/2009 9:06:00 AM

Nicely done - Has a woody feel :-D

Derrick Burton

Date: 9/22/2009 11:29:00 PM

Your way with words.. enjoyed this piece a whole lot, short and powerful and enjoy your night!:)

Date: 9/22/2009 9:23:00 PM

I really like the creative perspective in this poem. I like the surprise ending. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen

Raul Moreno

Date: 9/22/2009 7:02:00 PM

This series is a creative approach nicely penned...Raul