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Classical Elements - 1 - Water

symbolic element for intelligence and wisdom water .. unknown depths note : i will do all 5 natural elements 1/ water 2/ wood 3/ earth 4/ fire 5/ metal

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/28/2009 3:46:00 AM

Interesting work here. Keep writing. Sara

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 9/26/2009 8:52:00 PM

Oh, by the way, I wanted to tell you that there are actually 4 elements, "air, water, earth and fire". Wood and metal would belong to earth I believe. Just a thought. :) Caroline.

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 9/26/2009 8:50:00 PM

Nicely written Haiku. Interesting imagery. Had to read your poem after seeing your name and realized you are from Belgium. Although I live in california, I am originally from Belgium. I was born in Renaix/Ronse. It is nice to meet a fellow poet from the ""old country" so to speak. I will read more of your work. Caroline.

Corinne Curcio

Date: 9/24/2009 9:05:00 AM

This is beautiful - Onto the next element :-)

Derrick Burton

Date: 9/22/2009 11:30:00 PM

another great piece.. enjoy your night! :)

Raul Moreno

Date: 9/22/2009 10:26:00 AM

Creative series Marco, these elements represent life...Raul