Andrea Dietrich Poet Verse

Clarity In a Treasure Box

PRINTS

snapshot

images


though frozen in time

their faces are beaming

I touch their smiles recalling


"Memories in a treasure box"


Written June 27, 2016 
for the "Clarity in a Treasure Box" Poetry Contest of nette onclaud

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Connie Marcum Wong July 5, 2016 at 11:58 AM I would have gone exactly the same way with this contest Andrea as photos capture the spirit of a person and reveal so much. I loved your entry Andrea. Congratulations on your placement! 7 ;+)

Nette Onclaud July 2, 2016 at 1:33 PM how gracious, andie.. love the last line.. sweet congrats on your win and thanks for gracing my contest..huggs

Sunita U.D Palawon July 2, 2016 at 12:17 PM Congrats. This very nice...the form too challenging for me :D

Paul Callus July 2, 2016 at 9:55 AM I like your take on this clarity theme, Andrea. Where would we be without photos that give added life to our memories! ~ Congratulations! // paul

Brian Davey June 29, 2016 at 10:44 PM Nice image of a soft tender moment with ones self in remembering! Good luck in the contest

Annalinda W. June 29, 2016 at 10:15 PM Andrea, Your clarity poem is well composed...oh yes, I can relate. AnnaLinda

Chris Hagy June 29, 2016 at 6:26 PM I love my pictures too! Well put together write Andrea.

Harry Horsman June 29, 2016 at 3:25 PM And how times flies, when in nostalgia mode, love the sentiment here..

James Inman June 29, 2016 at 10:58 AM Very nice, touching write.

Tom Quigley June 29, 2016 at 8:39 AM Very nicely done!

Demetrios Trifiatis June 29, 2016 at 8:10 AM Wonderful images! Good luck dear, Andrea! I have enjoyed it!

Joanna Daniel June 29, 2016 at 3:24 AM Love the last line:) Truly memorable:)

Meenakshi Raina June 28, 2016 at 11:23 PM I thought of the same...you did it so well...

Eve Roper June 28, 2016 at 7:32 PM Andrea, love the form love the subject a 7. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve

Frederic Parker June 28, 2016 at 7:16 PM as do we all, though I'm not sure this generation when they age will have photo albums to spend time with..

Ilene Bauer June 28, 2016 at 4:59 PM well done, andrea! best of luck in the contest...

Jan Allison June 28, 2016 at 4:23 PM Great one Andrea - I thought of doing photos but couldn't think of that initial word with one syllable - you aced it my friend:-) hugs jan xx