Cityscape

Cityscape

The artist’s hand reshapes yesterday
    In straight lines
    Of hard edges -
Peaks of 
    Right angles perfected
    Missing oblique or obtuse –
Claiming the horizon
    In full frontal 
    Silhouette 
Cut from ebony shades,
    When daylight sinks into the shadows
    And twilight goes down meeting midnight 
One dimension pyramids,
    Floors layered by steel reinforced 
    Triangulated honeycombs,
Octagonal rounds 
    Gather cotton clouds
    Topping off their naked crowns,
Lofty spires
    Scrape the midnight 
    To gather far flung stars
Flat rectangles with jute box tops
    Soar with arches -
    Lines leaping up and sliding down -
Squares low and squat,
    Took up their space,
    Yanked from the line,
Openings left 
    Like toothless 
    Grinning;
Concealed within the cityscape unblinking
    The murmurings of urban sighs,
    No rise and fall of breathing, 
Foundation’s feet bound in stone
    Swaying only when magnum cores
    Tremble moving plates east to west, north to south;
Unseen
    The doorway cradle songs
    Of shivering dreams,
Desperation 
    Pacing 
    On the nineteenth floor
Fauna’s night perfume
    Floating up behind dark floral gates
    Of swirling iron
Grids of neighbors – blocks of neighborhoods -
    Graphs of boulevards winding round,
    Absent from the cityscape.

Inspirational verse – “When the lights go down in the city and the sun shines on the bay; do I want to be there in my city….I want to be there in my city.” Journey
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Carber Avatar
February 13, 2020 at 11:27 AM
Congrats Sam!
Kauffman Avatar
February 13, 2020 at 8:48 PM
Thanks LJ!
Cunningham Avatar
February 12, 2020 at 6:00 PM
Brilliantly composed verse Sam, so discriptive, by any chance are you an architect?. Congrats on your top win. Tom
Kauffman Avatar
February 13, 2020 at 8:48 PM
Thank you Tom! I' m not an architect. But it was fun to try to think in terms of architecture! This poem was such a joy to compose and put it into a format like a building!
Gauthier Avatar
February 5, 2020 at 3:24 PM
Awesome, Sam. Love the emotion throughout. A FAVE. Congrats on your podium finish.
Kauffman Avatar
February 5, 2020 at 10:32 PM
Thank you for your congratulations. You really have great abilties to see into the heart of a piece. I wanted the emotion to be there but almost encased by the cityscape
Watt Avatar
February 5, 2020 at 12:07 PM
Great write, Sam. I particularly like the toothless imagery and the lines, "Claiming the horizon / In full frontal / Silhouette" Congrats on your high placement ~ John
Kauffman Avatar
February 5, 2020 at 10:27 PM
Hi John, You picked one of my favorite lines and one of my favorite images. Thank you for your congrats!
Pandit Avatar
February 5, 2020 at 9:19 AM
Amazing descriptive write, Sam--congrats on your win.
Kauffman Avatar
February 5, 2020 at 10:25 PM
Vijay, Thank you for stopping by and for your message. Was so much fun to develop the images.
La France Avatar
February 5, 2020 at 8:44 AM
Sam, congratulations on your win in the contest with this awesome poem _Constance
Kauffman Avatar
February 5, 2020 at 10:22 PM
Thank you Constance! I so appreciate your message.
Agustin Avatar
February 5, 2020 at 8:40 AM
Wow! Thanks for sharing this... very picturesque. God bless you.
Kauffman Avatar
February 5, 2020 at 10:21 PM
Thank you Beata. I did try to create a mental picture so readers could put themselves into the cityscape. Blessings to you!
Radice Avatar
February 5, 2020 at 5:57 AM
Great poem. I've really enjoyed reading all three winners' poems. Thanks.
Kauffman Avatar
February 5, 2020 at 10:17 PM
Thank you Gary. I too loved all three poems. Such an honor to place. I know the competiton must have been stiff.
Ward Avatar
February 5, 2020 at 3:38 AM
I enjoyed the imagery you have created here, Sam. Well done for the poem's high win of third place in my contest "Cityscape".
Kauffman Avatar
February 5, 2020 at 10:15 PM
Julia, Thank you. I absolutely loved your theme and I am so honored by the third place. The theme really generated the imagery. So fun to write!
Leiser Avatar
January 21, 2020 at 9:23 PM
Your magnificent description of the cityscape reminds me so much of New York, Sam..superbly written! I’m faving this one! :)
Kauffman Avatar
January 21, 2020 at 11:34 PM
Laura, Thank you and thank you for your feedback. Yes, I can see the New York City skyline maybe from Hobokken with the moon behind the Empire State Building!
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