City Lights On Waking Up

I waken to a rush of sound and light. Somebody honks a horn as cars whiz past. My friend has driven us into the night and to a place where life is moving fast. I sit upright so I might take it in. The skyline is a smear of pulsing glow. Resplendent is this blur amidst the din of traffic. I see artwork of Van Gogh! A starry starry night could not compare To how this city looks when I’m half blind. But now I grab the glasses which I wear for my nearsightedness, which tricks my mind. The street lights - still so bright - are right and clear when blobs of luminescence disappear! The scrambled word is T A R N D A I Written 10/3/14 by Andrea Dietrich For the "Find the Puzzle" Poetry Contest of nette onclaud
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Sirak Avatar
October 15, 2014 at 8:35 AM
I don't much like cities, prefer to be out in the country with trees around but you made the city seem pretty and almost inviting.
Yvonne Avatar
October 11, 2014 at 2:15 PM
Congratulation on this marvelous sonnet, on your win. WOOHOO!!!!
Mehta Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 10:34 PM
Very expressive title, congrats on the win, Andrea
Richards Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 8:01 PM
A well told story/sonnet !! We live in the country, without street lights, ....so it is very dark. When visiting someone, it is so bright...seems so funny and strange when you aren't used to it.....makes it hard for sleeping!!
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 6:27 PM
Stopping back with my congratulations on your win Andrea.
Allison Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 4:16 PM
dropping back with my congrats Andrea:-) hugs jan xx
Haight Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 3:28 PM
Andrea, I love your sonnet. Your words truly made a verbal painting of the puzzle word, "Radiant." Congratulations on your win! Sandra
Austin Avatar
October 6, 2014 at 5:32 PM
Kind of a waking dream, eh? I get bleary eyed just reading this. Like it mucho though. Love, daver
Horne Avatar
October 6, 2014 at 3:47 PM
this is just beautiful, Andrea - a BIG winner here. Wouldn't even know that word (I'm impressed!!!)
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 5, 2014 at 10:43 PM
A wonderful entry for the contest Andrea. I couldn't think of a thing to write for this one. Yours is sure to do well!
Long Avatar
October 5, 2014 at 5:34 PM
good evening Andrea, I really like what you did in this poem. You can picture your words so vividly. good luck in the contest with this gem my friend. look forward to chatting with you.
Anish Avatar
October 5, 2014 at 4:40 PM
You wrote a nice urban "slice of life" here. Good luck in the contest! I have posted another urban - themed poem today. In fact today I went on a walking tour of the Lower East Side today! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Horsman Avatar
October 5, 2014 at 4:07 PM
This is brilliant brings us right into the modern era, then penetrates time, i see it as a time travel poem,,,mustlook at the contest,,,good luck..
Trifiatis Avatar
October 5, 2014 at 4:07 PM
Man made beauty surpassing sky's splendor because of the brilliance of your writing, dear Andrea! A stunning description! Good luck on the contest!
Lindley Avatar
October 5, 2014 at 1:30 PM
I love sonnets and this one sits so high up there my friend!! Rhyme is perfect , flow if awesome and message very clear. Rating a super, super 7 and enjoyed this fine read today..
May Avatar
October 5, 2014 at 9:31 AM
Very nicely penned Andrea....I am not sure I understand this contest....and scrambled words?...I will recheck to see if I can figure it out..
May Avatar
October 5, 2014 at 9:38 AM
Ok I checked it out and I get it now...
Thirtyseven Avatar
October 5, 2014 at 7:29 AM
What an amazing read. A Pleasure to say the least. I really like the way your visuals dance before my eyes. Out of your vast library of fantastic sonnets I think this one should sit on the top shelf. I'm sure that the scrambled word makes it even more mind blowing.
Lamoureux Avatar
October 5, 2014 at 7:05 AM
I like the way your mind works, this is a cool perspective.
Yvonne Avatar
October 4, 2014 at 11:47 PM
I like it a lot Andrea. I have written this challenge several times only to throw it out. I have not been able to find any inspiration to write a competitive poem. I have read some great poems for this competition though. This one is very creative and beautifully written.
Smith Avatar
October 4, 2014 at 8:37 PM
I finally figured out these puzzle poems...this one is great....the blur of traffic like Van Gogh...hugs Tim
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 4, 2014 at 8:26 PM
Beautiful poem with a very cute twist Andrea, I love it.
Vaso Avatar
October 4, 2014 at 6:08 PM
Loved this poem!
Allison Avatar
October 4, 2014 at 5:35 PM
You painted a brilliant picture here - I adore 'starry starry night' have got it buzzing through my head now!, good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xxx
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