JC Brul Poet Sedoka

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City Life

Twilight sea glistens
as bright northern lights unveil
Busan cityscape's splendor.

Watching neon lights
in rich blue, red, and yellow~
I remember Philippines.



note: blue,red and yellow of Philippines' Flag.

November 3, 2020
For Spin A Sedoka Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Nette Onclaud
2nd place

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Sam Kauffman January 13, 2021 at 11:42 AM Congrats and kudos JCB on another win for this sedoka that glistens with colorful images and reflections at twilight. All the best to you.

Sara Kendrick November 15, 2020 at 1:16 PM Congrats on your winner. Beautiful picture and great work to go along with the scene. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Paula Goldsmith November 8, 2020 at 10:56 AM Congratulations on your win. A beautiful poem and picture. Enjoy your win and day.......................

Andrea Dietrich November 5, 2020 at 2:43 PM congrats on your win with this fine poem. I'd love to see that beautiful island

Constance La France November 5, 2020 at 4:10 AM JCB, congratulations on your win in Nette's Sedoka contest with this excellent poem, beautiful imagery _Constance

Carol Mitra November 4, 2020 at 9:42 PM Congrats JCB....Philippines is indeed beautiful :)

Beata Agustin November 4, 2020 at 6:33 PM Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, making me vicariously see Busan, while enjoying city life here in our country. God bless you.