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Twilight sea glistens as bright northern lights unveil Busan cityscape's splendor. Watching neon lights in rich blue, red, and yellow~ I remember Philippines. note: blue,red and yellow of Philippines' Flag. November 3, 2020 For Spin A Sedoka Poetry Contest Sponsored by Nette Onclaud 2nd place

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Date: 1/13/2021 11:42:00 AM
Congrats and kudos JCB on another win for this sedoka that glistens with colorful images and reflections at twilight. All the best to you.
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Date: 11/15/2020 1:16:00 PM
Congrats on your winner. Beautiful picture and great work to go along with the scene. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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Date: 11/8/2020 10:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful poem and picture. Enjoy your win and day.......................
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Date: 11/5/2020 2:43:00 PM
congrats on your win with this fine poem. I'd love to see that beautiful island
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Date: 11/5/2020 4:10:00 AM
JCB, congratulations on your win in Nette's Sedoka contest with this excellent poem, beautiful imagery _Constance
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Date: 11/4/2020 9:42:00 PM
Congrats JCB....Philippines is indeed beautiful :)
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Date: 11/4/2020 6:33:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, making me vicariously see Busan, while enjoying city life here in our country. God bless you.
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