Edward Ibeh Poet Sedoka

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City Life

Steadily moving...
is the hustle and bustle
of a busy city life;

too hectic for some.
Violence and crime, constant.
Some adjust, and some do not.



SPIN A SEDOKA Poetry Contest (Winner: 5th Place)
Sponsored by: nette onclaud 
Theme Chosen: City Life
Date written: 11/02/2020

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Janice Canerdy November 13, 2020 at 2:27 PM Excellent, realistic poem, Edward. I live about sixty miles from Memphis, Tennessee--so glad I'm not closer! Janice Edward Ibeh November 14, 2020 at 6:48 AM Memphis is a rough city, huh? Seems like quiet area where you live, Janice:-) Thanks for the lovely visit!

Sara Kendrick November 13, 2020 at 12:03 PM I am glad that I live a rural life but I hear on the news about shooting, stabbings, and some deaths and some are in critical condition everyday on the news in large cities in our state. Thanks for the honor of placing in your contest. Sara.. Thanks for the placement in your contest. Edward Ibeh November 14, 2020 at 6:45 AM You're so luck, Sara:-) Rural life is so tranquil! Thank you so much for the visit and wonderful feedback!

Andrea Dietrich November 12, 2020 at 6:40 PM glad to finally see your winning sedoka, Edward. Very well done. Edward Ibeh November 14, 2020 at 6:41 AM Thank you so much, Andrea:-)

Constance La France November 5, 2020 at 4:23 AM Edward, congratulations on your win in Nette's Sedoka contest with this wonderful write, my city is like that, the downtown is a dangerous place _Constance Edward Ibeh November 5, 2020 at 1:59 PM Thank you so much for the lovely visit and feedback, Constance:-) Remain blessed, my friend!