City Life

Chasing the Goodlife Traveling far in packed trains Wonder why I can’t see sky Narrow lanes, pigsty Close my eyes to begging kids Needy, feeling within me. CITY LIFE Sponsor: Nette Onclaud Date: 2.11.2020

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Frances Schiavina

Date: 11/16/2020 10:50:00 AM

Congratulations Carol. Well said. What a liberating thought to know there is a kid within forever young.

Carol Mitra
Date: 11/16/2020 11:37:00 PM

Thanks Frances....much appreciated.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/12/2020 6:41:00 PM

Way to go with the number one win. I can't believe I have not seen this winner list yet. Belated Congrats.

Carol Mitra
Date: 11/12/2020 9:54:00 PM

Thanks dear Andrea....hugs.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/8/2020 10:21:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A wonderful true write. Many give and many close their eyes. When traveling one will see many things. Enjoy your wonderful win............

Carol Mitra
Date: 11/8/2020 6:42:00 PM

Thanks Paula....We can close our eyes....but the truth just does not go away.

Constance La France

Date: 11/5/2020 4:02:00 AM

Carol, congratulations on your win in Nette's Sedoka contest with this excellent poem, the line "close my eyes to begging kids" touched my heart _Constance

Carol Mitra
Date: 11/5/2020 4:22:00 AM

Thank you Constance....yes it touches a deep cord....love :)