City Home For Sale

city home for sale across from convience store... owners fat and broke

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Date: 6/1/2013 7:09:00 PM
cute Sara, I'd be fat if I had a store ;} glad you liked my Ancient Rain poem ;} I was making it longer, then I seen a picture of Jack London on another site that a lady friend posted. So I posted on her picture ;}
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Date: 5/27/2013 11:35:00 PM
Liked the play on words here Sara; there is also that truth element..that reflects sadness in the situations of people trapped..but thats a result of design feature of the system..' Joe..)
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Date: 5/26/2013 3:36:00 PM
Such a profound write Sara. Sadly, I see this social economic conundrum too often. Let's hope help intervenes.
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Date: 5/24/2013 8:35:00 PM
I like this, Sara! So humorous! Love, Kim
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Date: 5/24/2013 3:07:00 PM
Ha ha ha, I just LOVE the humor on this one! Oh I'm still laughing at this write! You have surely written a perfect poem here my friend as you have just the right amount of humor to substance within this piece! What a glorious poem, Great Work!!
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Date: 5/24/2013 3:04:00 PM
lol, had a good chuckle here, Sara : )
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Date: 5/24/2013 2:44:00 PM
Oh this was delightful, Sara. I actually laughed out loud! :) That last line...WOW! Good one!
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Date: 5/24/2013 2:25:00 PM
Creative, Sara ..... - Well done! - Have a beautiful weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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