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City Home For Sale

city home for sale
 across from convience store...
owners fat and broke

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Debbie Duncan

June 1, 2013 at 7:09 PM

cute Sara, I'd be fat if I had a store ;} glad you liked my Ancient Rain poem ;} I was making it longer, then I seen a picture of Jack London on another site that a lady friend posted. So I posted on her picture ;}

Joe Maverick

May 27, 2013 at 11:35 PM

Liked the play on words here Sara; there is also that truth element..that reflects sadness in the situations of people trapped..but thats a result of design feature of the system..' Joe..)

Robert Johnson

May 26, 2013 at 3:36 PM

Such a profound write Sara. Sadly, I see this social economic conundrum too often. Let's hope help intervenes.

Kim Merryman

May 24, 2013 at 8:35 PM

I like this, Sara! So humorous! Love, Kim

Russell Sivey

May 24, 2013 at 3:07 PM

Ha ha ha, I just LOVE the humor on this one! Oh I'm still laughing at this write! You have surely written a perfect poem here my friend as you have just the right amount of humor to substance within this piece! What a glorious poem, Great Work!!