Leon Enriquez Poet Haiku

City Haikus

This garden city
Concrete skyscrapers loom;
Greenery punctuate


Tree-lined avenues
Bourgainvillea clusters;
Traffic jam companions


Waltzing slowly
Overhead bridge;
Ant-people below


Old neighbourhood
Heartland community;
Ageing populace


Feeble old lady
Speeds on wheels;
Electric commotion


Playground
For small kids and big;
Noisy charades


Fitness park
For young and old;
Fighting spirit


City side walk cafe
Crowded after hours;
Beery happy hours


Noticeable absence
Dry spell ending;
Sudden torrential rain


Umbrellas raised,
Parasols  hoisted;
Too late this drenching


Side walk cobbler
New lease for old shoes;
Assorted wears


Hyper art queue
Long-winded delay;
Fussy customer


Bank ATM await
Ready to dispense;
Urgent pocket money


Office podium
By shopping mall;
Buzz of human traffic


Downtown hype
Temptations galore;
Mostly unnecessary


Leon Enriquez
23 Apr 2014
Singapore

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Line Gauthier October 29, 2017 at 9:00 PM What a lovely idea to string your haikus like a necklace made of gems. Wonderfully crafted. Leon Enriquez October 31, 2017 at 10:29 AM Dear Line Gauthier: Thank you for your kind words. Leon

Darlene Gifford September 7, 2014 at 10:48 PM Leon, I felt as if I were right there in every Haikus, experiencing every one! especially the old lady on wheels. Leon Enriquez September 8, 2014 at 12:02 AM Dear Darlene: Glad you found delight in these fragments. I habitually observe my surroundings. And after some time, think upon those moments of seeing things as they are and writing my haiku/ senryu fragments. Most people write a single piece at a time. To me, writing a string feels good, and from these, one or two gems appear. That's my mode of writing. Hope this helps. Leon

Monterey Sirak April 25, 2014 at 7:57 AM Vibrant images of a city you have penned here. I like the very last line, (but as a country girl, I would naturally think all the hustle and bustle was unnecessary) Leon Enriquez April 26, 2014 at 9:32 AM Dear Monterey: Just a casual glimpse and observation of happenings as I walk around the neighbourhood. glad you noticed the last haiku fragment which is how the city life is about beyond buying and selling. Thanks. Leon

Muhammad Safa Thajudeen April 23, 2014 at 6:50 AM Electronic commotion!mice. Leon Enriquez April 23, 2014 at 5:15 PM Dear Muhammad: Thank you. Leon