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City During December

Gentle winds Gentle on the city City near the sea City lush and green Green is beautiful Green is pleasant Pleasant to the eyes Pleasant to feel Feel refreshed Feel the breeze Breeze blows faster Breeze turns into cyclone Cyclone 'Vardah' Cyclone is coming Coming with fury Coming to make landfall Landfall in late afternoon Landfall brings rain Rain reminds of flood Rain is heavy Heavy is the damage Heavy windstorm lashes Lashes down electric posts Lashes through the trees Trees tumble down Trees ripped off roots Roots too weak to withstand Roots can be seen Seen above ground Seen and felt Felt and smelt Felt in the air Air smells strong Air scented with leaves Leaves that are crushed Leaves on the road Road is blocked Road filled with branches Branches all fallen Branches fresh and big Big vehicles pulverised Big loss to the city City without its green limbs City experienced damage Damage of verdure Damage in December December double disasters unfurled December remembered for devastation Devastation ... Unfurled ... ******************************************** 22.12.16

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Date: 12/30/2016 9:13:00 PM
WOW Jo a fabulous blitz poem many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/29/2016 11:07:00 PM
You are a master in blitz. Wonderful work. Congratulations!
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Date: 12/29/2016 8:09:00 PM
Thanks for this intriguing example of a blitz, I'd never seen one before. Congrats on your placement, Jo.
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Date: 12/29/2016 8:03:00 PM
Love the form, Jo, congratulations on your win. Have a Happy New Year’s and all your wishes come true… and don’t forget to eat those Black-eyed peas :) Hugs Eve
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Date: 12/28/2016 7:38:00 AM
- A really great poem, Jo - The shape is beautiful :) - Happy New Year :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/28/2016 4:01:00 AM
I love your choice of words with this deep poem Jo...
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Date: 12/24/2016 12:12:00 AM
Wow Jo, how impressive this poem is! It should be used as an example of how to write this form. Brilliant my friend! The way you have designed your lines is truly creative and spectacular! 7 Have a happy holiday! : )
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Date: 12/22/2016 11:46:00 AM
Captivating true writing dear, Jo! A seven!
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