City Alone

Life seems to be a chain of highs and lows 
That we routinely deal with come what may
But there is one that seems worse than others
Have you seen a vibrant city decay

For eons filled with bright lights and romance
Where ambition and laughter fill the air
And then one day the traffic seems lighter
The city seems to be stalled somewhere

It takes time but the lights begin to dim
The laughter of children becomes restrained
Houses - once homes - sit empty and weathered
Once full bank accounts become slowly drained

And then one day it is completely done
A city sits decayed and all alone
Dogs roam the empty and broken sidewalks
Their future like the city's is unknown


9-22-20
Contest: Decay
Sponsor : Constance La France
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Crabtree Avatar
October 5, 2020 at 6:29 PM
This poem is so true, Larry. I see the reality in your writing. It scares me sometimes the way the world seems to be going. Saved in my favorites. :) ~Angie
Andresen Avatar
September 30, 2020 at 5:50 AM
- Congratulations on your win ... an excellent poem ... an image that is reflected in every city, Larry - // Anne-Lise :)
Bradfield Avatar
September 30, 2020 at 7:46 AM
Thanks so much. Sad but true....
Roper Avatar
September 29, 2020 at 9:22 PM
Great canvas you've written, Larry , congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
Bradfield Avatar
September 30, 2020 at 7:45 AM
Thank you, Eve!
Ermine Avatar
September 29, 2020 at 3:15 PM
Larry, I have goosebumps. Your poem is phenomenal. Meter, straight forward spoken expression, spot on. Sad and applicable tale. Dog references at end finished off what I saw entirely throughout very clearly. Thanks for your excellent take and translation. A highly deserved Top Win is yours!!
Bradfield Avatar
September 29, 2020 at 4:04 PM
Thank you so much! I am afraid we have all seen too many scenes like that...
La France Avatar
September 29, 2020 at 1:46 PM
Larry, congratulations on your win in my Decay Writing Challenge with this excellent poem, a FAV for me _Constance
Bradfield Avatar
September 29, 2020 at 4:03 PM
Thank you, Constance. It is a sad butreal subject. Thank you for the placement.
Fowler Avatar
September 29, 2020 at 10:58 AM
Super imagery Larry. Congratulations on the win! Linda
Bradfield Avatar
September 29, 2020 at 4:01 PM
Thank you, Linda!!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 23, 2020 at 6:15 PM
Great and timely enter for this contest! Good luck!
Bradfield Avatar
September 24, 2020 at 1:20 AM
Thank you Kim !
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