City Alone

Life seems to be a chain of highs and lows 
That we routinely deal with come what may
But there is one that seems worse than others
Have you seen a vibrant city decay

For eons filled with bright lights and romance
Where ambition and laughter fill the air
And then one day the traffic seems lighter
The city seems to be stalled somewhere

It takes time but the lights begin to dim
The laughter of children becomes restrained
Houses - once homes - sit empty and weathered
Once full bank accounts become slowly drained

And then one day it is completely done
A city sits decayed and all alone
Dogs roam the empty and broken sidewalks
Their future like the city's is unknown


9-22-20
Contest: Decay
Sponsor : Constance La France
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020


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Date: 10/5/2020 6:29:00 PM
This poem is so true, Larry. I see the reality in your writing. It scares me sometimes the way the world seems to be going. Saved in my favorites. :) ~Angie
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Date: 9/30/2020 5:50:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win ... an excellent poem ... an image that is reflected in every city, Larry - // Anne-Lise :)
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 9/30/2020 7:46:00 AM
Thanks so much. Sad but true....
Date: 9/29/2020 9:22:00 PM
Great canvas you've written, Larry , congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 9/30/2020 7:45:00 AM
Thank you, Eve!
Date: 9/29/2020 3:15:00 PM
Larry, I have goosebumps. Your poem is phenomenal. Meter, straight forward spoken expression, spot on. Sad and applicable tale. Dog references at end finished off what I saw entirely throughout very clearly. Thanks for your excellent take and translation. A highly deserved Top Win is yours!!
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 9/29/2020 4:04:00 PM
Thank you so much! I am afraid we have all seen too many scenes like that...
Date: 9/29/2020 1:46:00 PM
Larry, congratulations on your win in my Decay Writing Challenge with this excellent poem, a FAV for me _Constance
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 9/29/2020 4:03:00 PM
Thank you, Constance. It is a sad butreal subject. Thank you for the placement.
Date: 9/29/2020 10:58:00 AM
Super imagery Larry. Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 9/29/2020 4:01:00 PM
Thank you, Linda!!
Date: 9/23/2020 6:15:00 PM
Great and timely enter for this contest! Good luck!
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 9/24/2020 1:20:00 AM
Thank you Kim !
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