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Citrus

Lemons accomplish more than blues will, oranges, only peel for sunsets

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Amber Plocica

Date: 7/22/2009 11:55:00 AM

This is so nice James. I'm only eleven and started to write poems. My uncle said you write wonderfully. He was right. I love this poem. X's and O's ...Amber

Cesar Cantu

Date: 7/18/2009 11:51:00 PM

I like food poetry, it is so.."home made"? @.@ oh, it is warm always, and with an afternoon mood jojojo thanks a lot for the experience =D

Bill Doggett

Date: 7/18/2009 11:30:00 AM

Jim, you are an exceptional poet. Thank you. You give me encouragement.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/18/2009 8:24:00 AM

Beautifully expressed of a sunset or could be a sunrise. Thanks your comments on my poem. Sara

Brian Strand

Date: 7/17/2009 11:53:00 PM

Thanks for your welcome comments today Jim.Rgds Brian

Matthew Anish

Date: 7/17/2009 9:38:00 PM

Juicy poem! Never knew about this form before - I looked it up on the forms site on the "soup". Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Nathaniel Köhp

Date: 7/17/2009 9:11:00 PM

"Only peel for sunsets" so vibrant. A wonderful cinqku and thank you for reading my stuff! Nathaniel

Jane Bowen

Date: 7/17/2009 6:54:00 PM

Wisdom in oranges is always a unique portrait of poetry....very nice Great Job! A very thought provoking cinqku...the meare thought that an accomplishment can be one up by a lemon...it ...it's lovely! And it's cool to have pieces like this here at the shhhhhoupie....thanks for your kind comment on autumns breeze~ always a friend here at the shhhhoup.... bye for now... :)

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/17/2009 7:48:00 AM

Wonderful images ... this was nicely done!!! :) ~ Carrie

Brian Strand

Date: 7/17/2009 12:24:00 AM

Nice painterly picture Jim.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 7/16/2009 6:31:00 PM

Wonderful -tart -poem.. More than one meaning I think! BG

James Peranteau

Date: 7/16/2009 6:20:00 PM

Now I'm thirsty James ! Great poem friend ! james

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 7/16/2009 6:05:00 PM

I LOVE CITRUS-quite a blended mixtur of our lives emotions ,do i get it jim?;-)lemons accomplish more than blues yet i go for the oranges--beautiful sunsets,love them more then sunrise,they re somehow romantic--great write jimbo;-)jim--charma