Citrus

This is so nice James. I'm only eleven and started to write poems. My uncle said you write wonderfully. He was right. I love this poem. X's and O's ...Amber

I like food poetry, it is so.."home made"? @.@ oh, it is warm always, and with an afternoon mood jojojo thanks a lot for the experience =D

Jim, you are an exceptional poet. Thank you. You give me encouragement.

Beautifully expressed of a sunset or could be a sunrise. Thanks your comments on my poem. Sara

Thanks for your welcome comments today Jim.Rgds Brian

Juicy poem! Never knew about this form before - I looked it up on the forms site on the "soup". Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

"Only peel for sunsets" so vibrant. A wonderful cinqku and thank you for reading my stuff! Nathaniel

Wisdom in oranges is always a unique portrait of poetry....very nice Great Job! A very thought provoking cinqku...the meare thought that an accomplishment can be one up by a lemon...it ...it's lovely! And it's cool to have pieces like this here at the shhhhhoupie....thanks for your kind comment on autumns breeze~ always a friend here at the shhhhoup.... bye for now... :)

Wonderful images ... this was nicely done!!! :) ~ Carrie

Nice painterly picture Jim.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today

Wonderful -tart -poem.. More than one meaning I think! BG

Now I'm thirsty James ! Great poem friend ! james

I LOVE CITRUS-quite a blended mixtur of our lives emotions ,do i get it jim?;-)lemons accomplish more than blues yet i go for the oranges--beautiful sunsets,love them more then sunrise,they re somehow romantic--great write jimbo;-)jim--charma