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Citrine

My mother use to tell me that she had the ugliest color of birthstone, While she adored my month’s gem, an April beauty that was known. I grew up thinking that November babies were particularly unlucky, Given how she had a vast indifference and beheld her own as mucky. Unknowing that this merchant stone embodied the love of my life, The blonde bead became a symbol for both my mother and my wife. The gleaming sun incased would soon illuminate the depths of my soul, When these two transcendent women, lift me up and help me seek my goals. All luminous qualities this amber crystal is said to possess, Go forth with prosperity and confidence, in love we shall transgress. As motherly mineral quartz relays to me messages from Mercury, Please, won't you keep whispering simple, sweet nothings for all eternity. —————— Date: May 7, 2019 A Tribute to a Precious or Semi-Precious Gemstone Poetry Contest Sponsor: Line Gauthier Poem Type: Rhyme

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Date: 5/20/2019 12:29:00 PM
Sometimes what our mothers don’t like, we see different and embrace. My mom was made fun of in school for her middle name, “hope” being deemed hopeless but my daughter chose to use her middle name for a while then how mom loved it. Love this citrine poem. Congrats!
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Briauna Brown
Date: 5/20/2019 4:00:00 PM
Completely agree, Kim! Thank you!
Date: 5/20/2019 8:53:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing your talent. God bless you.
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Briauna Brown
Date: 5/20/2019 3:59:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 5/19/2019 2:07:00 AM
Briauna, this is a beautiful tribute to both the gem and people who are precious to you. The last line is like the perfect note at the end of a song. Congratulations :). -ps
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Briauna Brown
Date: 5/19/2019 2:00:00 PM
Well, thank you!!
Date: 5/17/2019 12:52:00 AM
A very lovely winning poem Briauna. Congratulations on your wonderful second place! I have three November children and we use blue topaz instead. But Citrine and gold topaz are beautiful too. : )
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Briauna Brown
Date: 5/19/2019 1:59:00 PM
Thank you for sharing and the positivity!
Date: 5/16/2019 10:23:00 PM
Not too shabby, sorry for posting back-to-back, but worth the effort for saying Congrats for high honors Briauna! Aloha William
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Briauna Brown
Date: 5/19/2019 1:57:00 PM
Thank you, William!
Date: 5/12/2019 9:47:00 PM
Line is going to love this, the best to you, Aloha wk
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Briauna Brown
Date: 5/14/2019 12:54:00 AM
One can hope! Thank you!
Date: 5/7/2019 11:42:00 AM
Beautifully written Briauna...
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Briauna Brown
Date: 5/7/2019 3:33:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 5/7/2019 8:47:00 AM
Wonderful! I see this placing high. Good luck in the contest, already a winner for me :) xomo
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Briauna Brown
Date: 5/7/2019 3:33:00 PM
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 5/7/2019 8:18:00 AM
Nice description of the beauty of the stone and the beauty of the women in your life, Briauna. Good luck in the contest. All my best. John
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Briauna Brown
Date: 5/7/2019 3:32:00 PM
Thank you, I always appreciate your uplifting words!

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