Citrine

My mother use to tell me that she had the ugliest color of birthstone, 
While she adored my month’s gem, an April beauty that was known.

I grew up thinking that November babies were particularly unlucky, 
Given how she had a vast indifference and beheld her own as mucky.

Unknowing that this merchant stone embodied the love of my life,
The blonde bead became a symbol for both my mother and my wife.

The gleaming sun incased would soon illuminate the depths of my soul,
When these two transcendent women, lift me up and help me seek my goals.

All luminous qualities this amber crystal is said to possess,
Go forth with prosperity and confidence, in love we shall transgress.

As motherly mineral quartz relays to me messages from Mercury, 
Please, won't you keep whispering simple, sweet nothings for all eternity.



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Date: May 7, 2019
A Tribute to a Precious or Semi-Precious Gemstone Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Line Gauthier
Poem Type: Rhyme
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Rodrigues Avatar
May 20, 2019 at 12:29 PM
Sometimes what our mothers don’t like, we see different and embrace. My mom was made fun of in school for her middle name, “hope” being deemed hopeless but my daughter chose to use her middle name for a while then how mom loved it. Love this citrine poem. Congrats!
Brown Avatar
May 20, 2019 at 4:00 PM
Completely agree, Kim! Thank you!
Agustin Avatar
May 20, 2019 at 8:53 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing your talent. God bless you.
Brown Avatar
May 20, 2019 at 3:59 PM
Thank you!
Awtry Avatar
May 19, 2019 at 2:07 AM
Briauna, this is a beautiful tribute to both the gem and people who are precious to you. The last line is like the perfect note at the end of a song. Congratulations :). -ps
Brown Avatar
May 19, 2019 at 2:00 PM
Well, thank you!!
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 17, 2019 at 12:52 AM
A very lovely winning poem Briauna. Congratulations on your wonderful second place! I have three November children and we use blue topaz instead. But Citrine and gold topaz are beautiful too. : )
Brown Avatar
May 19, 2019 at 1:59 PM
Thank you for sharing and the positivity!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
May 16, 2019 at 10:23 PM
Not too shabby, sorry for posting back-to-back, but worth the effort for saying Congrats for high honors Briauna! Aloha William
Brown Avatar
May 19, 2019 at 1:57 PM
Thank you, William!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
May 12, 2019 at 9:47 PM
Line is going to love this, the best to you, Aloha wk
Brown Avatar
May 14, 2019 at 12:54 AM
One can hope! Thank you!
May Avatar
May 7, 2019 at 11:42 AM
Beautifully written Briauna...
Brown Avatar
May 7, 2019 at 3:33 PM
Thank you!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 7, 2019 at 8:47 AM
Wonderful! I see this placing high. Good luck in the contest, already a winner for me :) xomo
Brown Avatar
May 7, 2019 at 3:33 PM
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Gondolf Avatar
May 7, 2019 at 8:18 AM
Nice description of the beauty of the stone and the beauty of the women in your life, Briauna. Good luck in the contest. All my best. John
Brown Avatar
May 7, 2019 at 3:32 PM
Thank you, I always appreciate your uplifting words!
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