Circus

they paint my body,
and make me sing,
a smile i want,
from the man in the ring,

bend me this way,
throw me there,
with opened mouths,
they sit and stare,

i catch the eyes,
of one in the crowd,
of flowing laughter,
growing loud,

they see my chains,
my silent cries,
with each twirl in the air,
my spirit dies,

the lights go down,
i sit and wait,
as the one i love,
closes the gate

i wish for light,
where i used to fly,
before i was here,
where the clowns still cry
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
May 19, 2012 at 7:59 AM
Congratulations on your placement in David's "Circus" contest Maridean. Love, Carol
O'Leary Avatar
May 19, 2012 at 4:43 AM
Very nice... and congrats... Terry
Williams Avatar
May 19, 2012 at 3:54 AM
Maridean, congrats on your win, this sums up a circus performers life, striving to get a laugh while feeling sad inside...David
Andresen Avatar
May 7, 2012 at 1:41 PM
You are brilliant, like this poem alot. -Welcome to P-Soup, Maridean !!! - love from Norway and Anne-Lise
Brown Avatar
May 7, 2012 at 11:36 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Maridean. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
May 6, 2012 at 9:58 AM
this one is awesome. One of the best I've seen if for the circus contest!
Gorelick Avatar
May 5, 2012 at 10:36 PM
Wow, love this! Good flow and rhyme. BG
Poet Avatar
May 5, 2012 at 9:55 PM
An excellent write on circus.Enjoyed very much.I think this is for David's contest.A winner here.
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