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Circuit

rain drops replenish comatose cascade hastens potent ocean serves © Harry J Horsman 2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Pashang Salehi
Date: 10/4/2018 2:54:00 AM
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Indeed...Comatose cascades, what a nice imagery ...
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Mark Peterson
Date: 9/19/2018 4:12:00 PM
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Love the alliteration that envelops.
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 9/13/2018 1:22:00 AM
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Excellent. Well said. Thanks for sharing it .
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 9/2/2018 11:53:00 AM
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Second line attracts most. Nice haiku
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 8/27/2018 10:19:00 AM
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Love that, "comatose cascade", line. Wonderfully penned.
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Winged Warrior
Date: 8/21/2018 6:55:00 AM
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Great entry my friend...best of luck...love & light...^WW^
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Anil Deo
Date: 8/16/2018 1:10:00 PM
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The water cycle explained so well, and with poetic flair, besides. Shalom, shalom
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/16/2018 5:53:00 AM
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Refreshing poetic ardor dear, harry! Good luck!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/15/2018 3:32:00 PM
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I agree with Jan. I loved the alliteration.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/15/2018 3:31:00 PM
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Yes, it truly is a great circuit of nature, Harry. Thanks for liking my Ku. Since it got N/A, Maybe I can use it for some other contest.
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Lyric Man
Date: 8/15/2018 4:44:00 AM
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In a liquid sense it’s the circle of life.. nicely written Harry!!
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Nette Onclaud
Date: 8/14/2018 2:19:00 PM
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i like the cycle of water's rebirth, harry... wonderfully scribed 'ku..huggs
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/14/2018 2:01:00 PM
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Well written harry..best for a win.
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/14/2018 11:06:00 AM
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lovely haiku and great alliteration Harry:-) hugs Jan xx
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