Circling Vultures

birds of
prey seeking
to catch 
you when
the block
is on &
what you
produce
is not up
to par with
what they
feel should
coax them
into a place
of cultural
dominance
for it is the
tip top of 
the tippiest
top the crème 
de la crème 
who think 
that all 
things shall
follow suit
with what
they do &
what they 
like & what
they know
already---
so shall it
has been
so shall it
will ever
be & all 
that jazz
but we 
have some
news for
you o’
nazis of 
19th & 20th 
century
artistic
fartistic
critique-
--see that
we will
not go 
away so 
quickly
because
to stay a
thorn in
the side
of whatever
tradition
you seem
to be
perpetuating
means to
bow down
& suck
that righteous
***** 
which you
so eloquently
flail upon
the heads 
of any new
take on 
anything
that might
be deemed
“art” or
“lit” or
“music” or
one big fat
orgy of 
them all
entwined in
one---but
you spend 
so much time
finding flaw
in the work
of others
that you 
produce 
nothing of
your own &
nothing 
reveals a 
greater hack
than s/he
who is
suffocated
by the sound
of their own
voice
heckling
heckling
heckling
a
world
that is 
actually
moving,
thriving,
creating &
experiencing
itself.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 5/9/2012 8:11:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Andrew. Hope you have a great day. Love, Carol
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