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Circle of Vain

Many have lived on this terrestial ball Their landmarks we will never forget; Many lived as heroes and men of war And their victories were golden records broken and set. Aged millionaires are no were to be found Only shadows of their gold we find in our museum; Their mansions and chariots could not abound Only blueprint of their strength we find on the wall. The wealth of old oneday faded away And golden flowers became ugly and withered, Silver sceptres were broken and burried; at the end of the day Royal lanes became yeaning desert. Our life: a country of many things It's fondations are bundles of nothing Kings have ruled and warriors fought to get everything But they all ended up in the ditch of nothing. Our world: a kingdom of princes and princesses of fame A dungeon for those who lived in sorrow and shame ; Alas! i have seen serfs and lords gone insane Not catching the glimpse that our world is a circle of vain.

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Date: 7/19/2010 5:49:00 PM
Ain't it true though? Man is in one hell of a hurry to get to nowhere and can't enjoy his time here worrying about a tomorrow that may never come, and eventually won't. Vain, vain vain. and with one way out! Enjoyed your poem!
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Date: 6/14/2009 4:53:00 PM
Adeleke, Congratulations on your well deserve placement in Matt Caliri’s “Funnest-Hardest Poem Ever. I particularly liked your last line. I believe that if we are in the world, but not of the world, we can see the circle of vain for what it is. And then, live with charity AKA love. Lovingly, Dane
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Date: 6/12/2009 8:51:00 AM
Awesome write with a powerful message here, Adeleke !! Love the way you made the circle complete from the title to the last line!! Great writing and congratulaitons on your win in Matt's contest !!
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Date: 6/10/2009 5:38:00 PM
Warmest congrats on your excellent win in Matt's contest! Love, Shar
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Date: 6/10/2009 4:36:00 PM
Nice use of imagery. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Matt's contest. Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing! Karen
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