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Circle of Nature

CIRCLE OF NATURE Rustic leaves rustle Dance with the wind as they fall, Sycamore commands Naked courts the wild winter Awaits spring her arms held wide, When with demise of the old Nature’s carousel renewed. © Harry J Horsman 2019

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Date: 4/1/2019 11:38:00 AM
Hello Harry, I love this poem. I like the way you created it. Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 3/21/2019 11:39:00 AM
Harry, your creativity is wonderful and magical.. I really enjoyed your tanka.. A fave for me, my friend.. Have a blessed day!
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Date: 3/17/2019 10:19:00 AM
Hi Harry, Humans, animals, seasons all go through the circle of life - there are ups and downs along the way, hence every day should be precious, whatever the season. An absolute joy to read your poem ! Best wishes for the contest. Poetry hugs, Jennifer
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Date: 3/15/2019 12:29:00 AM
Round and round it goes...A lovely Tanka...
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Date: 3/12/2019 6:09:00 PM
G'day Harry … There will always be a circle of nature although there are many twists and turns in it. I did enjoy your verse Harry - Lindsay
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Date: 3/12/2019 3:26:00 AM
Wonderfully creative Harry. I hope to see this on the winner's list my friend! : )
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Date: 3/11/2019 7:53:00 PM
Harry~ wish I had your poetic gifts. Love, Panagiota.
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Date: 3/10/2019 6:47:00 PM
Great imagery in such a short piece..
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Date: 3/10/2019 4:09:00 PM
this remarkable piece makes me long for the lush of spring... greeat one, harry!...huggs
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Date: 3/10/2019 1:15:00 PM
Love this one Harry: Seems we are all on the same page in bidding adieu to winter. Nice to read you once more. SuZ
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Date: 3/10/2019 1:54:00 AM
Excellent. Very imagery and inspirational write. Enjoyed reading it.
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Date: 3/9/2019 2:41:00 PM
The circle of seasons, so aptly described, wishing you the best of luck for the contest-
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Date: 3/8/2019 12:26:00 PM
Hi Harry, you are a very talented poet - your poems are inspirational - poetry hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 3/6/2019 4:39:00 PM
"awaits spring her arms held wide" is what i envision. And "natures Carousel" another vision.
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Date: 3/6/2019 11:35:00 AM
Excellent Harry. I am always ready for the new season. Love the changes. Great job. God Bless, JB
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Date: 3/5/2019 6:09:00 PM
Good imagery in your Ottoanka. Lovely seeing you at Soup today, Harry. I wish i understood the rules of this invented form.
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Date: 3/5/2019 2:57:00 PM
fascinating spin of two seasons, harry... beautifully penned as always...huggs
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Date: 3/5/2019 11:36:00 AM
- Lovely written, Harry :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/5/2019 10:18:00 AM
Well written Harry , from autumn and back to the welcome spring. Good luck. Tom.
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Date: 3/5/2019 9:18:00 AM
I like the sights and sounds of nature's renewal in your poem, harry.
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