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Circle of Nature

CIRCLE OF NATURE

Rustic leaves rustle
Dance with the wind as they fall,
Sycamore commands
Naked courts the wild winter
Awaits spring her arms held wide,
When with demise of the old
Nature’s carousel renewed.

 © Harry J Horsman 2019

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Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 4/1/2019 11:38:00 AM Hello Harry, I love this poem. I like the way you created it. Have a nice day my friend. Login to Reply

Robertina B. Date: 3/21/2019 11:39:00 AM Harry, your creativity is wonderful and magical.. I really enjoyed your tanka.. A fave for me, my friend.. Have a blessed day! Login to Reply

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 3/17/2019 10:19:00 AM Hi Harry, Humans, animals, seasons all go through the circle of life - there are ups and downs along the way, hence every day should be precious, whatever the season. An absolute joy to read your poem ! Best wishes for the contest. Poetry hugs, Jennifer Login to Reply

Arturo Michael Date: 3/15/2019 12:29:00 AM Round and round it goes...A lovely Tanka... Login to Reply

Lindsay Laurie Date: 3/12/2019 6:09:00 PM G'day Harry … There will always be a circle of nature although there are many twists and turns in it. I did enjoy your verse Harry - Lindsay Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 3/12/2019 3:26:00 AM Wonderfully creative Harry. I hope to see this on the winner's list my friend! : ) Login to Reply

Panagiota Romios Date: 3/11/2019 7:53:00 PM Harry~ wish I had your poetic gifts. Love, Panagiota. Login to Reply

Silent One Date: 3/10/2019 6:47:00 PM Great imagery in such a short piece.. Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 3/10/2019 4:09:00 PM this remarkable piece makes me long for the lush of spring... greeat one, harry!...huggs Login to Reply

Suzanne Delaney Date: 3/10/2019 1:15:00 PM Love this one Harry: Seems we are all on the same page in bidding adieu to winter. Nice to read you once more. SuZ Login to Reply

Ravi Sathasivam Date: 3/10/2019 1:54:00 AM Excellent. Very imagery and inspirational write. Enjoyed reading it. Login to Reply

Michelle Faulkner Date: 3/9/2019 2:41:00 PM The circle of seasons, so aptly described, wishing you the best of luck for the contest- Login to Reply

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 3/8/2019 12:26:00 PM Hi Harry, you are a very talented poet - your poems are inspirational - poetry hugs, Jennifer. Login to Reply

John Loving Iii Date: 3/6/2019 4:39:00 PM "awaits spring her arms held wide" is what i envision. And "natures Carousel" another vision. Login to Reply

Judy Ball Date: 3/6/2019 11:35:00 AM Excellent Harry. I am always ready for the new season. Love the changes. Great job. God Bless, JB Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/5/2019 6:09:00 PM Good imagery in your Ottoanka. Lovely seeing you at Soup today, Harry. I wish i understood the rules of this invented form. Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 3/5/2019 2:57:00 PM fascinating spin of two seasons, harry... beautifully penned as always...huggs Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/5/2019 11:36:00 AM - Lovely written, Harry :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Tom Cunningham Date: 3/5/2019 10:18:00 AM Well written Harry , from autumn and back to the welcome spring. Good luck. Tom. Login to Reply

Vijay Pandit Date: 3/5/2019 9:18:00 AM I like the sights and sounds of nature's renewal in your poem, harry. Login to Reply