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Circle In the Sky

thunderstorm rolls in
    the rain pours down in buckets
lightning splits the sky

A beautiful sight
   after the rain a bow appears
Circle in the sky

 vibrant shaded hues
  colors of all wavelengths 
fascinating all

Colors beautify
    a vast skyline silhouette
like  a pot of gold

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/16/2012 6:34:00 PM
Such excellent work..Enjoyed the descriptiveness of it..Reads like a winning entry if for any of the contest..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 5/15/2012 8:45:00 PM
Joseph, this is a beautiful exit to an eternal hue of comfort... i like the walk without knowing what is truly painted gold... love your poem..pd
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Date: 5/15/2012 8:28:00 PM
Joseph, this is a beautiful exit to an eternal hue of comfort... i like the walk without knowing what is truly painted gold... love your poem..pd
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Date: 5/14/2012 9:52:00 PM
sweet rainbow poems, Joseph. Best of luck in the contest.
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Date: 5/14/2012 3:43:00 PM
these are excellent Joseph, enjoyed. harry
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Date: 5/13/2012 2:16:00 PM
Lovely haiku Joseph - well done! - oxox Anne-Lise
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Date: 5/13/2012 1:35:00 PM
Beautiful imagery here.Enjoyed the read.
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Date: 5/13/2012 10:37:00 AM
very nice, joseph!
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