Cinqku/2

Caged bird
Plucking bars
Bell rings loudly
Room service, maid service
Peachface
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Fraser Avatar
September 18, 2009 at 3:41 PM
Made me chuckle this one Doris, nice read>>James
Freeman Avatar
September 5, 2009 at 9:10 PM
This cingku very vivid, like being in the room, Sincerely Moses
Kendrick Avatar
September 5, 2009 at 7:20 AM
Nice to have room service and maid service. I could move into one of those motels that is only $149 a week and get those, Not. Mom
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