Cigarette Dangling

her child she spanks cigarette dangling baby turns away she inflicts real pain

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/15/2021 8:22:00 AM

Wow! Packs a punch!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/15/2021 8:17:00 PM

Thank you, Kim! :) gw

Anselmo Boles

Date: 6/14/2021 7:36:00 PM

A vivid and honest depiction of a harsh reality that is prevalent in our society today. Thanks for reminding all of us Gershon!...ab

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/15/2021 8:17:00 PM

You're right, Anselmo. It is an unfortunate reality. :) gw

L Milton Hankins

Date: 6/14/2021 6:46:00 PM

Oh my, this is a chilling image, Gershon, but a picture that needs to be painted. Excellent imagism.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/15/2021 8:17:00 PM

Thanks for the praise, Milt. Much appreciated.~ Gershon