Cicada Dreaming II - for Vanya's contest

*Cicada Dreaming was told to Roland Robinson in 1965 by Julia Charles of the Yoocum Yoocum clans from the area around Wollumbin in the headwaters of the Tweed River, Northern NSW, Australia, and is used with permission. The Cicada Dreamtime Bootheram (lore) involves disrespectful children who turn into cicadas underground, drinking the tree milk (sap) for seven years, until emerging and crying for their parents. It came from an online reference written by S.Starlore, (2018), Cicada Dreaming, which is no longer online. 

While commonly known to the people whose lore it is, it is probably new to most of us.

I wrote this in 2022 when I was missing the noise of summer. It now has a few edits and additions.



Poet's own quote: 'Everything has a story'

Tiny Dreamtime children imprisoned in the earth, 
pierce the little tree roots, to sip sap beneath the dirt. 

For seven years, cicada grubs, as they scratch and dig, 
keep getting so much bigger, keep popping off their skin.

One final time, they’re out and up: up a fence, up a trunk, up a shed.
I collect the hollow shells they leave, stuck with claws on curling feet.

'Buzz buzz buzz', their wings brush past my nose.
 All-day the raucous chorus is a non-stop drone.

A thousand bodies cling, on sticks and twigs and leaves.
Above my ringing ears their yellow wee rains down me.

Every year they deafen us. The noise is really bad -
crying for their mothers, screaming for their dads.

But, this year there are - none. 
I’m surprised that I feel sad.
Where have the mad things gone?

Yellow Mondays, Green Grocers,
Black Princes, Cherry Noses

Much as they annoy me,
I hope that they’ll be back.

Without the story's children,
So noisy, rude, and fun,

The hush of their absence
Says that summer hasn't come.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025



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Date: 9/10/2025 8:32:00 AM
Very unique. I know so little about them so it is informative as well
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Jeanette Swan
Date: 9/10/2025 2:37:00 PM
I liked the story when I first read it online because it was so surprising. Thanks for reading and commenting. J :)
Date: 9/10/2025 5:01:00 AM
Very wonderful creativity. Thanks dear poet
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Jeanette Swan
Date: 9/10/2025 2:38:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed the story. J :)
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