Chyrsaora Quinquecirrha

...inspired by 'Voyages 1' by Hart Crane


Choreographed and coruscating, 
skidding in their see-through costumes 
as the ocean's masqueraders, 
you scuffle and send them sideways.

jellyfish abound and flounder 
'neath the surface smooth as glass, 
they pester and you're irritated,
epidermis penetrated
you howl as you hobble on your way.

Deeper still the riptide churns, 
it's learned the tales of tragedy 
as you enjoy the ocean blue 
with rubber rafts and play toys, 
do not cheat the warning buoy, 
listen for its tell-tale sounds, 
the bottom of the sea is out of bounds.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 1/30/2016 3:38:00 PM
I have to confess that the title drew me in...very intriguing, Keith. You have sparked my interest somewhat. My very best regards as always! :) john
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 1/30/2016 3:57:00 PM
Thanks John... the neat thing is it fits the meter! Best wishes, Keith
Date: 1/30/2016 3:13:00 PM
Excellent, Keith. I love to look and stroll but no going in the ocean. I am an excellent swimmer but I prefer freshwater, clear freshwater.
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 1/30/2016 3:59:00 PM
Its based on a poem by Hart Crane about the dissolution of a relationship of his... Thanks Daniel! Keith
Date: 1/30/2016 2:59:00 PM
Perfect Keith.
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 1/30/2016 4:00:00 PM
I'm glad you enjoyed it! Best wishes, Keith
Date: 1/30/2016 2:53:00 PM
Oh, Keith, I'm so glad your poem is written in English...and so well done. Marine biology is no longer my forte' haha.
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 1/30/2016 4:03:00 PM
The title even fits the meter... da da dee dee/da da dee dee ~ jelly fish abound and flounder! Thanks for your appreciation! Best wishes, Keith
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