Church Dinners, a Rumination

Bless the deviled eggs and the preacher’s children.
Grab a piece of fried-to-perfection chicken.
Coca-cola cake or banana pudding?
~ Prodigals welcomed






January 29, 2019
Sapphic Stanza with a JUX Poetry Contest
Craig Cornish, Sponsor

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Date: 9/23/2019 9:09:00 AM
This is excellent. The title made me curious and I am not disappointed. Well done, I could taste the goodies.
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Date: 9/23/2019 1:41:00 PM
Oh, thank you so much Richard.
Date: 2/15/2019 5:04:00 PM
Oh how I love this!!! As someone who has attended church potlucks for 40 years, I could smell the food and feel the chaos of kids chasing each other, people jostling for a spot in line, and church ladies displaying proudly their concoctions! Well done! ~Cindi~
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Date: 2/15/2019 5:56:00 PM
And seeing folks you haven’t seen since the last one ;) Thank you! I have so many fond memories of those dinners.
Date: 2/14/2019 8:40:00 PM
very clever and well written...congratulations :)
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Date: 2/14/2019 9:22:00 PM
Thank you very much :)
Date: 2/13/2019 11:00:00 PM
Congratulations! You nailed the contest and the desserts at every church picnic, potluck or prayer circle.
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Date: 2/13/2019 11:10:00 PM
Thank you dear friend! You can not imagine how tickled i was to realize I could fit "banana pudding" in that spot :)
Date: 2/13/2019 8:59:00 PM
Congrats. Thanks for sharing your talent. God bless you.
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Date: 2/13/2019 9:00:00 PM
Thank you so much Beata :)
Date: 2/13/2019 8:40:00 PM
seeing this again. Gotta fave it. Congrats!
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Date: 2/13/2019 8:59:00 PM
O wow! Thank you, Andrea :)
Date: 2/13/2019 6:59:00 PM
I love the opening line. Congrats.
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Date: 2/13/2019 7:10:00 PM
Thank you Rob. That’s my favorite line, too :)
Date: 2/13/2019 2:08:00 PM
You have entertained us with this delightful Sapphic stanza, P.S! Love the jux, too. Congratulations on such a fine showing! Regards // paul
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Date: 2/13/2019 2:10:00 PM
Thank you so much Paul! I am glad you enjoyed it. I had a fun headache writing it ;)
Date: 2/13/2019 1:17:00 PM
Mmm...so good! Congrats, P.S.!
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Date: 2/13/2019 1:48:00 PM
Thank you Kim :) (this one makes me hungry)
Date: 2/13/2019 11:43:00 AM
EXCELLENT! I love the memory of these potlucks, especially in winter, when the steam ran down the windows from all the good hot food! Congratulations!
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Date: 2/13/2019 2:08:00 PM
Andrew thank you for that image! Yes, cold days with home cooked food... :)
Date: 2/13/2019 10:08:00 AM
You've described all with perfection of form!
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Date: 2/13/2019 12:15:00 PM
Craig, my goodness you have made my day! I enjoyed learning this form. Thank you for the challenge as well as the honor of placing in your contest!
Date: 1/31/2019 12:48:00 AM
Nice PS, brought back some memories, aren't the preachers kids the devil sometimes! :)
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Date: 1/31/2019 6:17:00 AM
I pictured the church ladies trying to set everything out and kids scampering. I am glad you liked it :)
Date: 1/30/2019 5:47:00 PM
'The Prodigal Son' is one of my favorite parables! I have to admit, I have never tried Coca-Cola cake, though banana pudding sounds good! I can practically TASTE the fried chicken! :-)
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Date: 1/30/2019 8:59:00 PM
I miss the church potlucks, too! And there was always one single fellow, who would bring chips! I LOVE it!
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Date: 1/30/2019 6:43:00 PM
This is a bit of nostalgia for me. We don't do church potlucks like we used to. But, everybody would show off and make their best recipes. Makes me miss a whole lot of sweet ladies from my childhood. :)
Date: 1/29/2019 9:29:00 PM
This is Great P.S. I love it!!
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Date: 1/29/2019 10:40:00 PM
Thank you Bobby :)
Date: 1/29/2019 3:03:00 PM
Now that had JUX and I loved the whole thing!!
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Date: 1/29/2019 3:39:00 PM
O thank you Andrea! I am glad you liked it :)
Date: 1/29/2019 2:58:00 PM
This went to my FAV list, I liked it in its entirety, P.S.
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Date: 1/29/2019 3:37:00 PM
O thank you so very much!
Date: 1/29/2019 11:18:00 AM
Love this one! Great and fun verse, P.S.! Good luck in the contest! :)
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Date: 1/29/2019 11:20:00 AM
Thank you!
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