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* This was created from a short-form piece I wrote about a year ago. Watercolor painting is by Dean Crouser. *

You were my mind's cocoon ... Oh, at first I ran, multi-legged, from the intensity of your intent, the fear of a love, transforming ... the weight of a passion profound. But I knew, I felt, I knew ... there ... it was there, like natural selection, Unavoidable once set into its motility. I fed on music - songs like leaves of sustenance, one to the next, building the energy that would supply my change with its aliment, pretending to be the unwary prey of the inexorable conversion, but the pure joy of being ... sharing all that Motivated me with such ease and energy and knowledgeable unity, SLOWED me to a crawl, and I conceded my movement to the sublime. Your love and kinetics and piercing prudence, coalesced with mine, like Light stabbing darkness, spilling color like blood ... I, drenched in You, captured, stopped, wrapped with warmth and safety and indulgence, held so close in integral passion that it froze my soul - a consensus of spirits rarely known. The Universe stopped and waited while we caught Up to its wonder, and in total sincerity and care, the metamorphosis of my heart began. Oh, painful is much of the employment of such change, the tissues and elements and muscles of my being screamed In that dynamism, grasped at anything familiar for purchase, but it was a futile act, and slowly I was swallowed by all that you wished of me ... consumed by everything you saw in my eyes and aspect, dissolved and macerated by the potential of what WE could be and have and do and Realize, together. The dream of a phoenix, risen, sustained the pains, but sometimes a dream can be the only viable catalyst, and there in the midst of that blissful, exquisite turmoil, the butterfly, slowly ... came forth, Dried its wings in the sun of your smile and countenance, let go the branch of familiarity and the past, and soared ... soared in the knowledge that those dreams were possible, glided in the joy of security and the cadence of faithfulness, flew in the breeze of the multitude of hopes That you placed beneath my wings, arose with feeling and strength and possibility, soared with you, and for you, and to you ... you were my mind's cocoon ... but alas, sweet and sad and so short, is the life of a butterfly, And oh, so brief ... its beauty. ~ 1st Place ~ in the "Changing The Mind's Diaper" Poetry Contest, John Lawless, Sponsor.

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Date: 5/27/2018 8:53:00 PM
I enjoyed reading more than once... to not miss the depth of your imagery. The brilliant way you write humbles me to think you read poem from my post. Congrats!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/27/2018 11:38:00 PM
This is such a wonderful comment, Barbara, and you made my day with it - put a smile on my face. When such competent writers as you are so gracious and heartfelt with their words, it reaches deep, and makes this whole poetry thing so worthwhile! Thank you SO much for these very kind words, My Friend! :-) <3
Date: 5/5/2018 4:10:00 PM
Greg, simply, you are my favorite butterfly. Your personification was eloquent, to say the least. Well done, a well deserved gold. Clever yet masterful.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/6/2018 12:48:00 AM
So very kind of you to say, Greg, and I greatly appreciate it. Blessings, my friend! :-)
Date: 5/4/2018 8:53:00 PM
Congrats on your gold medal win, Gregory. Superbly done.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/5/2018 2:13:00 PM
Very kind of you, Line - thanks! :-) <3
Date: 5/4/2018 1:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this interesting, imagery beautiful, expressive poem. Well done!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/5/2018 2:13:00 PM
This is such a nice comment, Susan - thank you, Friend! :-) <3
Date: 5/4/2018 11:21:00 AM
Added to favs!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/5/2018 2:19:00 PM
Thank you!! :-)
Date: 5/4/2018 11:18:00 AM
This is amazing-- full of imagery and emotion! Congratulations!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/5/2018 2:20:00 PM
Thank you very much, Juliet - so appreciated! :-) <3
Date: 5/4/2018 7:14:00 AM
Gregory, I found this to be quite an intriguing take on the theme. As i meandered through my perceived metaphoric interpretations. Thanks for entering the contest.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/5/2018 2:21:00 PM
Thank you so very much, John, this made my week! I am humbled and honored to be on a list with such great poets, and so pleased that you found my poem worthy of such high placement. Blessings and best wishes! :-)

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