Chronicle of Change

Time then had facile fluidity,
flowing like smooth autumn breeze, 
touching the somber edges of indolent life. 
You walked in a slow pace, gladly let me pass, 
held my hands with passion for a long while, 
waited to listen when and what I spoke.  
Your tolerance showered cool rains of empathy
on my blazed mind in troubled times.  
You encased my shadow in the petals of heart 
when I was gone, never to return. 
I could look through transparent shroud of my life, 
see happiness glitter in the core, 
for my soul was a flower of bliss 
in the bouquet of togetherness. 

Time now is verily viscous, 
sliding in uncertain cascading course, 
eroding the stony bedrock of life’s canyon. 
You rush through mad crowd, don’t let me go, 
your arms no longer cross distance to embrace, 
in cacophony you don’t listen when I speak. 
Your compassion has morphed into a mirage 
in the desolate desert of my desiccated times. 
When I’m gone you erase my fading face 
instantly from your insulated slate. 
I can’t look through opaque veil of my life, 
don’t see where happiness has disappeared. 
My soul is a web of snapped threads 
in the frail tapestry of discord. 

July 5, 2020
Contest : Strand Completely New (5), Any Theme Any Form
Sponsor : Brian Strand

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 7/7/2020 11:32:00 PM
Just lovely, Sublimal. Beautiful images - "your empathy showered cool rains of empathy." There is such a depth in your lines. Congratulation on your win!
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Date: 7/6/2020 10:02:00 PM
Well-said, Subimal, my friend, and my compliments truly for your endeavors, achieving 1st Place, Kudos! -- Aloha~@William
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Date: 7/6/2020 5:59:00 AM
Subimal congrats my friend on your top win!;)
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Date: 7/6/2020 4:27:00 AM
Change well described. Soul a flower of bliss to web of snapped threads, though a sad one. Hope is fountain of life. Not to give up. Congrats on fine placement. Mohan
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