Christmas With Christ

“It’s the day God will send His Son” Overheard the guardian angels say “It’s the day The infant king will jump out of the tummy” Heard the sheep caressing the calf “It’s the day The saviour of the universe is coming” Eavesdropped on the trees murmur I wonder! What it felt to see him ************************************* A man with a shepherd’s crook and a woman Make place for their stay where it meant for me How dare! They don’t care Oh, she is carrying and let it be I don’t care I am all busy whining my litany of complaints to mom Of that black sheep who tried making a meal out of me ****************************************** “Sleep baby, it’s time to bed” I hear mom whisper But, why is that woman crying Loud in pain ***************************************** “He is coming, our saviour, the infant King To wipe out the pain To console the deprived souls To teach us Love” Heard the shepherds whisper Snooping out of bed Craning my neck I got a glimpse of the divine delivery Soft pink fingers, kindness-filled eyes and a sweet smile All it is Made at ease He is all Love ****************************************** “Oh My Lord, How can I be a part of the divine mission” Being a silly little flower “Mom, wake up, wake up” “The Mighty King came; let us make a bed for Him” Fondling him with my face Effacing all my sins I find peace and let it long until I merge in You in the dawn
Poetry contest : Christmas with Christ Sponsor: Isaiah Zerbst

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Date: 12/11/2016 6:03:00 PM
HI Punnia, bless you for this poem. I think you meant "erasing all my sins". I loved it though Have a blessed Christmas this year.
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Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 12/16/2016 1:01:00 AM
thank you jannie for the lovely comment and a beautiful wish. Wishing you too a blessed Christmas :) love and peace to you friend
Date: 11/16/2015 4:14:00 PM
outstanding beautiful pen bless you
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Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 11/16/2015 8:50:00 PM
Thank you very much lian for this beautiful comment and more than that your time...means alot..jesus blessings :) take care
Date: 11/15/2015 12:41:00 PM
Great piece on the real value/meaning of the "holiday" , especially following the appalling events in Paris. WE need Peace now , more than ever !
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Date: 11/15/2015 9:07:00 PM
yeah sad about the events in Paris. Let us all pray for them :) the only powerful weapon and guard... thank you for your time and touching comment Sean. Jesus blessings :) Take care
Date: 11/15/2015 10:16:00 AM
Make the change for the contest name as well.:0)
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Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 11/15/2015 10:21:00 AM
done :) thank you Richard :)
Date: 11/15/2015 10:15:00 AM
No apology required, just curiosity on my behalf.
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Date: 11/15/2015 9:36:00 AM
for all of my Life....one thing has always cut like a knife....in an attempt to cause pain and strife....they call it x-mas but you cant have Christmas without Christ....;)
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Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 11/15/2015 10:14:00 AM
hahahahaha.....lovely..thank you for that :) Jesus blesisngs..
Date: 11/15/2015 8:56:00 AM
May I ask the significance of why you spelled Christmas differently??
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Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 11/15/2015 10:15:00 AM
Malayalam is my Mother tongue. :)
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Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 11/15/2015 10:13:00 AM
oops sorry..it's a typo from my part...actually in Malayalam language when we pronounce Christmas there is no mistake when an 'h' is added, according to Malayalam phonetics. So while typing it came unknowingly.. I am so very sorry... Thank you for notifying me :) Corrected :))
Date: 11/14/2015 5:03:00 PM
what a lovely write, may Christ bless you during this time of reflection.
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Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 11/15/2015 12:34:00 AM
Aww. Your comment itself is His blessing..thank you...jesus blessings.. :)
Date: 11/14/2015 12:15:00 AM
Beautiful!
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Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 11/14/2015 12:24:00 AM
Thank you Arthur...jesus blessings...:))
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