Christmas Waltz

Soft
songs in
tunes
know of
Christ child's love
in praise
that
pure dear
notes were sung,
as Kings bend low
with gifts of
gold and
oils
to bless
God's sweet son.
Christmas,
we
share His
love.


Dec. 21, 2015
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Godwin Avatar
December 31, 2015 at 5:37 PM
So very lovely - smooth as green Christmas velvet ... CayCay
Dietrich Avatar
December 30, 2015 at 7:53 PM
Hi, Connie, it was great seeing you at my poems today. I hope you are doing GREAT with the new year coming up. I am scrambling so I can get Joe's dinner made soon!!
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December 29, 2015 at 9:59 PM
CONNIE, a beautiful win.... Congrats on your placement. Love **SKAT**
Sietesantos Avatar
December 29, 2015 at 8:14 PM
Hi Connie, just swinging back with congratulations on a wonderful win! Best wishes. Pandita
Gorelick Avatar
December 29, 2015 at 6:02 PM
Hi Connie, congrats to you..a sweet poem. BG
Dietrich Avatar
December 29, 2015 at 4:41 PM
Hello, my friend and congrats for your win. HOpe you are having a very nice day.
Merryman Avatar
December 29, 2015 at 3:31 PM
Connie, congrats on your placement with this lovely, reverent write! Thank you for participating! Happy New Year! Love, Kim
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 30, 2015 at 11:52 AM
Thank you very much for my placement in your contest Kim. I really like the waltz wave form. Much happiness in the New Year my friend. Love, Connie
Allison Avatar
December 29, 2015 at 2:06 PM
A beautiful wave Connie congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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December 25, 2015 at 9:30 PM
A beautiful waltz, Connie, , Merry Christmas and Happy New Year May all your days shine and dreams come true. :) Every day should be a day with family and friends. I appreciate everyone. Sorry to all those I have taken for granted. SHAME ON ME. I promise, 2016 will be a new me. Merry Christmas!!! May the true meaning of the holiday season fill your heart and home. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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December 24, 2015 at 2:37 PM
Hi, Connie. I feel the thrill of the Christmas Spirit in your vibrant words of faith. God's Son reveals Himself through humble love. Christmas is a time for reflection and we must reflect on the meaning of Christ's birth and His mission. I have enjoyed reading your poem. Thank you for your comments throughout the year. Best wishes in the contest. Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year to you and your loved ones. Hugs, Andrew.
La France Avatar
December 23, 2015 at 10:41 PM
Connie, this is beautiful ~
Austin Avatar
December 23, 2015 at 12:28 PM
Yes. This reads in three-quarter time. Beautiful. Did I wish you a Merry Christmas? I am so forgetful. Just in case, I'm wishing you the most colorful, musical, happy holidays possible. LOve, DAvel
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December 23, 2015 at 11:58 AM
Your thoughts come alive and breathe within your words. An absolute delight to read with a natural flowing cadence that welcomes the experience, and ends on a note of faith and love. I am captured by the images so skillfully developed by the author and the passion of the words move me. Emile. #7
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December 23, 2015 at 8:52 AM
Oh, this excellent piece is such a lovely Christmas waltz! It dances and sings of the true meaning of Christmas! This is just further evidence that you, dear Poet, are always at the top of your game! Best wishes for a wonderful 2016! Pandita
Haight Avatar
December 22, 2015 at 10:39 PM
Such a lovely wave poem, Connie. You have imaged the whole Nativity Scene within these few words! All the best for the contest. 7, Hugs, Sandra
Dietrich Avatar
December 22, 2015 at 6:32 PM
you went the route of the true meaning of Xmas. VERY lovely, Connie!
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December 22, 2015 at 6:57 PM
Thank you Andrea. I love the fact that we can still connect through the essential oils of Myrrh, Frankincense and gold that were the honored gifts for the baby Jesus. Mele Kalikimaka! Aloha, Connie
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December 22, 2015 at 6:30 PM
Hi Connie, this one puts me in a Christmas state of mind. Merry Christmas and thanks for your always encouraging comments. You are a classy lady.
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 22, 2015 at 7:03 PM
Tht is one of the nicest compliments you could give me Richard. I have always aspired to have class. My granddaughter just loves helping me put up our nativity display and every Christmas is better with her here. Mele Kalikimaka my friend. Aloha, Connie
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December 22, 2015 at 4:49 PM
OH....this is really beautiful, Connie...So...melodious and sweet. Good luck in the contest, dear. Wishing you all the best. Hugs
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 22, 2015 at 7:05 PM
Well I tried to make it musical because of the waltz wave form. Thanks a lot Eileen. Mele Kalikimaka! Blessings and Aloha, Connie
Lindley Avatar
December 22, 2015 at 1:42 PM
Love these great poems that enhance and inspire during this blessed holiday season my friend!! Super 7 and truly a great Christmas waltz....
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 22, 2015 at 7:12 PM
I use frankincense and myrrh and think it is wonderful that they are still as important today. I have studied aromatherapy and have over 100 different oils I work with, so of course I had to include them in my poem. Have a wonderf Christmas Robert, you and your family. Thank you very much. Blessings and Aloha, Connie
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December 22, 2015 at 11:45 AM
A sweet poem that highlights Christmas and what it stands for in so few words. May we all share in His love! ~ Best regards to you, Connie:) // paul
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December 22, 2015 at 7:20 PM
Of all the gifts the three Kings could have given to baby Jesus they chose the most precious which were the oils of frankincense which raises the spirit and the healing oil of Myrrh. I love workng with essential oils and had to mention them in my poem. Love is the most important gift we have been given from Jesus's teachings. Have a blessed Christmas Paul, you and your family. Blessings and Aloha, Connie
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December 22, 2015 at 8:57 AM
Wow, Connie...God Bless You, what an amazing poem for the holidays. I would be remiss if I did not fav this blessed gem. Thank you I really needed to read this poem today. Lots of love, armand.
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 22, 2015 at 12:42 PM
How wonderful that you liked this little waltz enough to fave it Armond. That raises my spirits today my friend! Bless you. Love and peace, Connie
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December 22, 2015 at 5:53 AM
- Simply beautiful, Connie - Merry Christmas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 22, 2015 at 12:44 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise. I wish you a bright Mele Kalikimaka my friend! Aloha, Connie
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