Christmas Traditions

Christmas Traditions
     By Dane Smith-Johnsen

It was the Day after Thanksgiving and every store in town.
Had planned to opened wide its doors before daylight could be found.
It was an outlandish sight to see people sleep overnight. 
Shoppers camping on sidewalks people waiting in the moonlight.

The Christmas shopping season was formally set in motion!
Hustling, bustling, getting, and grabbing: bikes, pipes, and lotion.
TVs, wreaths, computers, briefs, trees, ties, anything money buys. 
Some starry-eyed children sway singing with Santa beneath skies.

Meanwhile, Jesus Christ, the nativity, and live manger scenes
Attempt to teach people what the Christmas season really means.
A few carolers come singing along their neighborhood streets. 
And the folks that they sing too, with big smiles, surprise them with treats.

A God loving soul amid the clamorous celebrations,
Gathers his family, to make costumes and preparations.
Mary, Joseph, Jesus, shepherds, and the three Kings with gifts, myrrh.
Reverently, they reenact our blessed Savior's Holy birth.

This poem was written for Carolyn Devonshire's Christmas in Your Town contest.
Poetic form:  A narrative written in couplets.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Delacroix Avatar
December 19, 2009 at 8:51 PM
Congratson your win in Carolyn's contest, Dane Ann, very nice write!. Merry Christmas, Caroline.
Haick Avatar
December 7, 2009 at 6:06 AM
Congratulations on your win in Carolyn's Contest, Dane Ann! Peace and love, Audrey
George   Avatar
December 4, 2009 at 9:38 AM
lovely story, Dane-Ann. Congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest. Love, Lainie
K. Avatar
December 2, 2009 at 8:42 PM
Congratulations on your win in Carolyn's poem :) such a wonderfully written reminder on the true meaning of Christmas!
Guzzi Avatar
December 2, 2009 at 5:46 PM
Wowser! You go gal BIG win! Light & Love
Fraser Avatar
December 2, 2009 at 11:51 AM
Lovely poem Dane Ann, congrats on your win in Carolyn's contest >> James
Ace Avatar
December 2, 2009 at 4:34 AM
Congrats on your well deserved win, Dane-Ann. A very beautifully descriptive poem! I like where your focus is leading the reader. Lightwalker
Strand Avatar
December 2, 2009 at 12:24 AM
Congrats on your success in Carolyn's contest Dane.rgds Brian
Golden Avatar
December 1, 2009 at 10:44 PM
Wonderful piece, Dane Ann! Congrats on your big win! Hugs, Donna
Johnson Avatar
December 1, 2009 at 7:07 PM
Congraltulations Dane Ann on your win. I hate the fact that not all towns allow the manger scene on public property. After all it is His birthday. Love, Joyce
Sweetheart Avatar
December 1, 2009 at 3:42 PM
Congrats, Dane Ann, on your winning poem in Carolyn's contest.. well deserved win.. blessings .. luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart"
Kelly Avatar
December 1, 2009 at 1:11 PM
Congrats , Dane-Ann , on your contest win , with this great rhyming peice ...
Freeman Avatar
October 20, 2009 at 10:44 AM
A beautiful narrative of Christmas tridition, here Dane. Best of luck. Sincerely, Love, Moses
Chircop Avatar
October 18, 2009 at 7:10 AM
this is the true spirit of Christmas,,thanks for sending me on a journey to the season..beautiful--Charma
Fraser Avatar
October 17, 2009 at 6:21 PM
Christmas is a lovely day in the calander, beautiful entry into Carolyn's contest >> James
Richards Avatar
October 17, 2009 at 4:50 PM
Yes...I am always amazed at the eager shoppers that fill their holiday with madness of a buying frenzy......the craziness is epidemic. I long for the old-fashioned values of yesterday. Good luck, a great poem!! ~ Love, Carrie
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October 17, 2009 at 4:33 PM
You captured the bustling activity of the season as well as the spiritual purpose. Thank you for supporting my contest, Dane. Love, Carolyn
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