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CHRISTMAS THRILL

‘Twas the night before Christmas and we’re thrilled That in our reunion we would be filled With blessings of family-love and cheer Midst fellowship around those we hold dear. Caring warmth exceeded blazing bonfire As no one among us would like to retire While hearing testimonies of hope’s best Exuding from hearts’ compassionate zest. With carol’s reverberating delight Our praises reigned toward heavenly flight Feasting upon the treasures of God’s grace* To share with others along goodness-brace. Thrilled were we with remarks of gratitude Propelled by faith and kindness’ fortitude Indeed experienced always by our pets Joining us in our glad video vignettes.
*Romans 3:24 Being justified freely by his grace through the redemption that is in Christ Jesus. December 10, 2024 3rd place, "The Night Before - 4" Christmas Rhyme Poetry Writing Contest Sponsored by Joseph May; judged on 12/21/2024

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Date: 12/22/2024 7:54:00 AM
Very nicely done Beata, Congrats on your win, Merry Christmas
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Date: 12/14/2024 10:18:00 PM
I can so well relate to this experience. Christmas Eve with family and dear ones, sharing happy experiences and words of gratitude, enjoying the great dinner. While Christmas carols and testimonies of hope rise, our faith will be strengthened. I experience the warmth of this Christmas family reunion. Wish you the peace and Joy of Christmas, dear Beata.
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Date: 12/10/2024 7:16:00 PM
Our praises reigned toward heavenly flight... May the good Lord bless you and yours.
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Date: 12/10/2024 4:46:00 PM
I can literally feel the warmth radiating from these beautiful images of Christmas... Wonderful writing, Beata, and perfectly rhymed :)
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Date: 12/10/2024 2:23:00 PM
"Thrilled were we with remarks of gratitude Propelled by faith and kindness’ fortitude Indeed experienced always by our pets Joining us in our glad video vignettes." Also my favorite time of year. In Christ's Service, Joe. Delightful, uplifting poetry!
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Date: 12/10/2024 12:25:00 PM
Caring warmth exceeded blazing bonfire… While hearing testimonies of hope’s best… Feasting upon the treasures of God’s grace…the loveliest of times! Hugs and Merry Christmas, Beata!
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Date: 12/10/2024 8:48:00 AM
What a creative/fun write. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a blessed day................
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