Christmas Surprise

One Christmas whilst decking the halls
My hubby passed out after malls
I heard a loud screech
He jumped out of reach
Cried, “Dear, they were not Christmas balls!”

November 29, 2018
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December 2, 2018 at 8:22 PM
LOL...Ouch! Love this one, Cindi :) Many congrats on your win in the contest...Charlie
Rockwell Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 9:21 PM
Thank you, Charles!
Allison Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 4:36 PM
very witty Cindi:-) many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx hugs Jan xx
Rockwell Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 4:58 PM
Thanks Jan!
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December 2, 2018 at 12:04 PM
Ouch! Poor hubby. Be careful next time, Cindi. Great laughs. Competition for this contest was awesome and you did a great job. Thanks for supporting the contest with your witty verse. Hugs, Carolyn
Rockwell Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 1:23 PM
Thanks Carolyn! A fun write! Have a Merry Christmas!
Michael Avatar
November 30, 2018 at 7:09 PM
Very creative and fun...Nice one Cindi
Laurie Avatar
November 29, 2018 at 11:53 PM
G'day Cindi … appears that decorations were erected in the nude. A bad move by any man - thank you Cindi - Lindsay
Green Avatar
November 29, 2018 at 1:24 PM
This was really funny. Those little hooks can really hurt sometimes. : )
Rockwell Avatar
November 29, 2018 at 1:26 PM
But what a lovely shade of red when you’re through! ;)
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