Christmas Spent In War

snow
stained red
frightened eyes
tears scorch and burn
gas-filled bombs on Christmas in our trenches

Far from home dying and dead lay scattered
where bombs explode
on Christmas
with gifts
death

screams
anguished
silent graves
frozen in place
we may never see another Christmas
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Fowler Avatar
December 22, 2023 at 4:39 PM
I appreciate the honor you do soldiers in the trenches at Christmastime. Very nice Frederic. Congratulations! :)
Dietrich Avatar
December 22, 2023 at 1:51 PM
Some great images here regarding the cruelty of war. one line over my limit but deserving of a win. Congrats.
Scars Avatar
December 20, 2017 at 11:04 AM
so sad, war is never something I want to see. I can't even imagine what they go through. congrats dear Frederic :)-luloo
La France Avatar
December 19, 2017 at 12:33 PM
Frederic, congratulations on your win in my contest with this touching poem and oh that music, is so haunting, it never fails to bring a tear to my eye.
Parker Avatar
December 19, 2017 at 1:35 PM
Thank you for the kindness Constance
Inman Avatar
December 19, 2017 at 8:09 AM
Frederic, a meaningful, sad poem. I work with a gentleman who used to play horn in the arm band.
Dietrich Avatar
November 28, 2017 at 6:07 PM
wow, this has great impact, Frederic. I am seeing a number of them based on the war theme. Such an ugly horrid thing to happen to our soldiers.
Onclaud Avatar
November 27, 2017 at 11:25 AM
the dire reality of a war- torn world can be so devastating.. a most soulful write from your dripped pen, frederick
Tripp Avatar
November 26, 2017 at 8:08 PM
This is emotionally heart wrenching. Nicely paired with taps. Speechless.
Allison Avatar
November 26, 2017 at 6:46 PM
Your vivid words depict the harsh reality of war so well Frederic. Good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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