Christmas Mourning

I loved Christmas. Every year
Bach’s oratorio filled the church,
the boys’ voices soaring skyward. We drank
mulled wine at the market, lighted 
candles on the wooden pyramids,
carefully set up mom’s collection of nutcrackers, carved
by hand in small villages in the ore mountains.
We baked Grandma’s cookies, 
smelled the incense in the wooden smokermen,
and sang the old carols, mom at the piano,
we all perfectly harmonizing. Gathered
around the big table, extended to fit everybody,
we shared meals and love.

All this is decades 
and an ocean away. Now Christmas 
means loneliness
in a land that is still
foreign, when the homesickness, 
held at bay during the year,
flares 
and distance bites
like a bitter wind. 



Date: 11/18/2018
Contest:  CHRISTMAS MOURNING
Sponsor:  PS Awtry

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 12/25/2018 10:50:00 AM
A lovely sad verse...like love brings joy and pain...have a wonderful holiday season and a happy Christmas...love & light...^WW^
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 12/26/2018 9:22:00 AM
Thank you, ^WW^. A wonderful Christmas season to you as well.
Date: 11/20/2018 1:21:00 PM
Love this, Agnes, all the vivid recollections and the poignant coda. Makes me look foward to Christmas even more, and I don't think I can pay it a higher compliment.
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 12/26/2018 9:23:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words, Bernard.
Date: 11/20/2018 7:00:00 AM
Powerful and beautiful in its details, Agnes. Most endearing.
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Date: 11/19/2018 9:13:00 AM
Eloquently evoked... I especially loved that last line- a perfectly chosen metaphor!
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Date: 11/18/2018 2:37:00 PM
Beautiful! The last verse filled with sadness.
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 11/18/2018 2:41:00 PM
Thanks, Kim. That seems to be the point of the entire contest.
Date: 11/18/2018 1:38:00 PM
Well written and expressed Agnes :)
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 11/18/2018 2:41:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi.
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