Christmas Mourning

I loved Christmas. Every year
Bach’s oratorio filled the church,
the boys’ voices soaring skyward. We drank
mulled wine at the market, lighted 
candles on the wooden pyramids,
carefully set up mom’s collection of nutcrackers, carved
by hand in small villages in the ore mountains.
We baked Grandma’s cookies, 
smelled the incense in the wooden smokermen,
and sang the old carols, mom at the piano,
we all perfectly harmonizing. Gathered
around the big table, extended to fit everybody,
we shared meals and love.

All this is decades 
and an ocean away. Now Christmas 
means loneliness
in a land that is still
foreign, when the homesickness, 
held at bay during the year,
flares 
and distance bites
like a bitter wind. 



Date: 11/18/2018
Contest:  CHRISTMAS MOURNING
Sponsor:  PS Awtry
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Warrior Avatar
December 25, 2018 at 10:50 AM
A lovely sad verse...like love brings joy and pain...have a wonderful holiday season and a happy Christmas...love & light...^WW^
Krampe Avatar
December 26, 2018 at 9:22 AM
Thank you, ^WW^. A wonderful Christmas season to you as well.
Chan Avatar
November 20, 2018 at 1:21 PM
Love this, Agnes, all the vivid recollections and the poignant coda. Makes me look foward to Christmas even more, and I don't think I can pay it a higher compliment.
Krampe Avatar
December 26, 2018 at 9:23 AM
Thank you for your kind words, Bernard.
Gauthier Avatar
November 20, 2018 at 7:00 AM
Powerful and beautiful in its details, Agnes. Most endearing.
Mcferran Avatar
November 19, 2018 at 9:13 AM
Eloquently evoked... I especially loved that last line- a perfectly chosen metaphor!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 18, 2018 at 2:37 PM
Beautiful! The last verse filled with sadness.
Krampe Avatar
November 18, 2018 at 2:41 PM
Thanks, Kim. That seems to be the point of the entire contest.
Sands Avatar
November 18, 2018 at 1:38 PM
Well written and expressed Agnes :)
Krampe Avatar
November 18, 2018 at 2:41 PM
Thank you, Heidi.
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