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Christmas Morning

Together we recall, delicate moments- smells, whispers and dreams. Back to simpler times, sweet memories- rush to forethought. Tiptoeing softly, down creaky stairs- sneaking a peak. Early morning before dawn, presents piled high- teasing and tempting. Calling to curiosity, shaking for sounds- size and weight, enticing wonderment. Hearing the rumble and grumble, Dad's truck pulling in- we race back to bed. Pretending to sleep, another hour or two- till we gather and pounce. Upon their bed, waking mom, startling dad- breakfast and coffee. We would sit, like a pack of wolves- hovering ready to attack. Around the tree, maybe to stockings first- finally to unleash. Frenzied ripping and tearing, to reveal our prize- treasure galore on Christmas morn.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 8/13/2008 7:41:00 AM
Now..that's a perfect Christmas morning!! You described it so beautifully...and our three children did it exactly as you so lovingly portrayed in this poem! Puts a smile on even Scrooge's face!!......Carrie
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Date: 8/13/2008 7:40:00 AM
Through a child's eyes. Great write. Of all the past, wonderful remembrances Christmas is the best. Are you a musician?....if so, you know how conductors can be....not just women. Love, Daver
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Date: 8/13/2008 5:32:00 AM
This brings back all the memories of my childhood at Christmas and strengthens my feelings towards giving the same to my children. What a wonderful vivid read. Michael
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Date: 8/13/2008 5:21:00 AM
I just loved the comparison to a pack of wolves - Great job describing Christmas Morning - God Bless
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