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Christmas Morn, Night Still Paraded Its Cloak, a Christmas Narrative

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Robert J. Lindley, 12-19-2019
Narrative (RHYME), (A True Christmas Tale, Believe If You will)
 
Note: After my having been told yesterday my poetry is sad,
solemn and too morose. I decided to write a poem that was in
spirit with this Christmas and its joyous season. Take it as it
comes, and ponder just how much of it is true. For would be
a sweet blessing if such a miracle ever happened to you!
And I a poet that truly believes, in romance and life as a
treasure that is truly Heaven sent. May oft take leeway in
my poems, even if I do later have to for such extravagant flair, 
take to bended knee and so faithfully and sincerely repent!
Eleven rhyming stanza's...
Syllables Per Stanza:60
Total # Syllables::::660
Total # Words::::::::530
Folks, after being called a grinch by a poet friend, I decided to write this
story.. Make of it what ever you will, some will believe , many will not,
how much was a dream and how much was a reality... hmm.. even I
the author am befuddled. As I have that ring but not the beautiful lady--
and every so often to this day, under glow of a full yellow moon, she
appears and whispers enticing words to an old man that she still sees
as a young knight slaying dragons and rescuing damsels in distress !
Who am I to crush her dream?? 
Christmas Morn, Night Still Paraded Its Cloak, A Christmas Narrative Christmas morn, night still paraded its cloak dawn had not our dear earth with its rays soaked yet something magical was in the air for beneath barren tree, presents a pair one was bright red, other was brighter blue one was from me, other present from you! I slept last night, nothing was under there the floor was as empty as tree was bare shock, I sought explanation for this scene for even that bare tree glowed brighter green snow began to falling as wonder grew I wept with joy seeing present from you! How and why a miracle came about in a daze, my spirit let out a shout twenty-one long years since we had last kissed your wonderful beauty this soul had missed now this blessing, something heavenly sent I fell to sobbing for those lost years spent! With tears still falling I heard a loud knock I soon found coming, another great shock opened the door, there you my darling stood Christmas dress, red cloak and even red hood aghast, heart skipped a beat or maybe three your first words spoken were, long time no see! We laughed and our day was heavenly bliss we each said, how true love we did so miss I pointed the bare tree and had to ask how, how did you do this surprising task she replied and asked, what I have no clue I said, presents one from me, one from you! I then saw deep shock and a truth I knew that something nice had been sent but by who she said, let see these mysterious gifts as each one may true kindred souls uplift opened, hers was a locket long since lost mine a ring bought at very precious cost! Each had been long lost in a tragic flood buried very deep under tons of mud both had been tokens of our raging love sworn to vows we made to heaven above how could such treasure have ever been sent was such a most miraculous event! As midnight moon, its soft glow shining down saw us joined yet again in our hometown set the scene for romance and sweetest bliss we both wept at years we lost and time miss hers tears falling onto my naked chest we felt as lovebirds returned to our nest! Was this real, our just another realm's dream us coupled as a former loving team magic was broken, as this we both heard plain as day, came down loud echoing words by a jolly fat man riding his sled bringing Christmas joy while dressed all in red! Be of cheer, tis' the season to rejoice now greatest present given, a new choice hold to this moment, letting in true bless forget the past, no more sad sins confess and that is truth of this surprising tale miracle came, so true love would not fail! Now brother poet, you are sure to ask can you in this tall yarn now truly bask I shall reply, why yes friend, such is true earth is old, nothing under sun is new may you read, enjoy this poetic verse not think me a damn fool or something worse! Robert J. Lindley, 12-19-2019 Christmas Narrative, (A Tale Told And A Romantic Story Once envisioned)

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Date: 12/21/2019 4:03:00 PM
I find your poetry has a great depth of feeling Robert; can't believe someone called you a "grinch"; poetry is about feelings. If a poet is not allowed to feel then why express? Keep writing my friend, put those feelings down!
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Robert Lindley
Date: 12/22/2019 8:23:00 AM
Thank you my friend. They said posting like a grinch at this time of the year but they meant no insult. So true, a poet simply must stay true to his/her heart and soul!! GOD BLESS..
Date: 12/19/2019 3:29:00 PM
An enjoyable Christmas narrative Robert, although I do enjoy your darker poe like verses. Hope you and your family have a wonderful Christmas and best wishes for 2020. Tom.
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Date: 12/19/2019 4:15:00 PM
Thank you my friend. Poe and Raven are both on a Christmas break. Raven flew to Rome to roam about , while Poe journeyed the nether regions to find Annabel Lee. I miss 'em both but will make do. Old poets have vast experience in that line of work..... God bless....

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