Christmas Love

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Poetry/Sonnet/Christmas Love
Copyright Protected, ID 12-1691-079-06
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Written, December 06, 2024
For the International Contest, Best Romantic Poem
Sponsor, Emile Pinet, Judged 01/31/2025

In my Christmas dream fragile snowflakes fall, as blinking lights sparkle like twinkling stars; the flakes start to feel like a waterfall, and love embraces and true bliss is ours. My dream is magical and I know him, he is my sweet darling gone up above; we kiss, entwine- for passion does not dim. Santa, is this my Christmas gift called love ? As we twirl and leap in this dream abyss, he and his arms and I began to cry; when I fell he held me close with a kiss, I wish my Christmas dream had no goodbye. Oh, dear Santa . . . make this love dream real; but, my love fades - in this dream surreal.

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John Read

Date: 12/6/2024 11:37:00 AM

Hi Constance, that is so sad yet so sweet at the same time, the one I love is also in heaven above. wish you well in the contest God bless. xx

Constance La France
Date: 12/6/2024 12:30:00 PM

John, thank you for the nice compliment and comment and for sharing. I find it hardest at Christmas time. They say time heals but I find that it does not, love never dies, blessings Constance