Christmas Eve Dreams

Tommy had loved music all his life
  And he enjoyed playing Christmas carols with his fife
 But when he came downstairs on Christmas eve
  He just couldn't believe
The present Santa was giving to  his wife

  So he hollered out to St Nick
" Hey, that's not the present I picked"
 But Santa kept saying ho ho ho
  While Rudolph waited out in the snow
 Then Tommy awoke from his dream  real quick

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 1/14/2014 9:43:00 AM
Hello Joseph, ~ Did you really think I'd leave without stopping by to say Good-bye. Never, Muwahahahaha! Why the word alone sounds -forever and difficult. LOL, I love this place and the poets. A couple of soup friends and I are taking a short vacation. REMEMBER! The Best Thing About Leaving is the "RETURN." I will leave in good faith, in hopes you don't forget me, and you are looking forward in having me visit you and your poems in the future. HAHA, I will bring a new me when I return. "I Can't wait to see you again:) If you ever want me to read a certain poem or you wish to say hi... Drop by my E-Mail Address. apoetdestroyer@yahoo.com :) Sincerely yours ~Always & Forever~ The Sweet Poet Destroyer
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Joseph May
Date: 1/14/2014 4:10:00 PM
Great news PD...I agree, goodbye seems like forever ..Enjoy your vacation...Glad you are staying I look forward to your return...or should I say your coronation...lol
Date: 12/15/2013 4:58:00 PM
Cute one..Enjoyed gettting a chuckle..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 12/15/2013 9:12:00 AM
excellently penned gets the mind thinking all sorts
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Date: 12/14/2013 9:09:00 PM
hmmm, now I am very curious what that present was!!! me and my dirty little mind. IT was reminding me of "I saw mommy kissing santa...." Good one.
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Joseph May
Date: 12/15/2013 6:27:00 AM
thanks Andrea...use your imagination
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